some colour no doubt
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Re: "Look" ( Chapter 21 up now! Comments welcome!)
Very nice!
I only picked out one grammar error
I guess you meant months
As for the plot, its great! Especially showing different dialects between different regions. Your description if the network machine in the poké centre was pretty darn good as well.
Very nice!
I only picked out one grammar error
“Yep. In a few month you’ll always do missions alone. This will give you experience.”
I guess you meant months
As for the plot, its great! Especially showing different dialects between different regions. Your description if the network machine in the poké centre was pretty darn good as well.