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Thank you kindly, sir ^^ The generic Sinnoh mythology is something of a pet peeve of mine, I'll admit. I won't reprise my argument as to why Arceus doesn't really fit the Abrahamic God mould (At least in canon) - suffice to say I wanted to go for a more rounded approach to religion. Also it gave me an excuse to have a couple of nuns participate in the Tourney, which I think is just amusing. I actually enjoyed writing about Eve more than Josh in this one. Josh has a vaguely antagonistic attitude towards the gods - he believes in them, he just doesn't like them very much. As for this:
It's a matter of practicality, frankly. I didn't want to be stuck with having to write a green football until I could come up with an excuse to evolve. Besides, I thought a baby Roselia to be far more adorable
Yes and no. I don't think May Day really found it's way over to the US - if I were to speculate, it's probably because the Puritans didn't like those kinds of celebrations very much. They're fun, for a start. This version of May Day, as Flaze-kun noticed, is something of a pastiche. May Day is mostly a Christian folk festival these days (And therefore mostly celebrated because it's quaint), but it has a lot of the trappings of other ancient celebrations. Historically it is very much a celebration for the commoners, and as such always had plenty of dubiously-Christian symbols wrapped up in it. Because, frankly, humans have always wanted a way to celebrate that time of the year when things are growing again and with any luck everyone will have enough to eat.
I've based May Day and Eostre largely on Neopagan celebrations of May Day, or Beltane. The headdresses (Especially the horns), the drums and the bonfires are all very Neopagan. So is the lamb (Symbol of new life) and the circle, more or less. The sexual imagery linked to the new season, that too. The layout of the shrine is pretty much Shinto. I think I made up that bit about the handmaiden's kisses. Oh, yeah, and the Horned King isn't much different from the archetypal Horned God/Green Man, though I personally suspect that that archetype is quite a young one.
Thank you, though I can't really claim much credit. It's based on a series of Clefable subspecies I found on tumblr. I had originally adapted a lot more from that art, but ironically the one I didn't change much made it's way in.
Haha, well, she got interrupted, now, didn't she
That was a concern, believe me. Originally I had the battle run from start to finish - at that rate I was going to end up with a chapter verging on 8,000 words. I didn't really want to cop out and rush the May Day celebrations since that forms a break in the relentless battles, so, there it is. In hindsight I'm not so sure as to whether I really should have done the May Circle, but as you say, it does bring the focus firmly on Eve
Thank you, and thank you! For the record, I really do find all comments useful, praise or criticism, so really don't worry
Beautiful chapter. I love Eve's faith (and the contrast with Josh's non-faith), it's so refreshing to read about this sort of thing in the Pokémon world... too many writers just take Sinnoh mythology for granted and I think that's a shame...
Thank you kindly, sir ^^ The generic Sinnoh mythology is something of a pet peeve of mine, I'll admit. I won't reprise my argument as to why Arceus doesn't really fit the Abrahamic God mould (At least in canon) - suffice to say I wanted to go for a more rounded approach to religion. Also it gave me an excuse to have a couple of nuns participate in the Tourney, which I think is just amusing. I actually enjoyed writing about Eve more than Josh in this one. Josh has a vaguely antagonistic attitude towards the gods - he believes in them, he just doesn't like them very much. As for this:
I also wonder why she was "born" a Roselia rather than a Budew
It's a matter of practicality, frankly. I didn't want to be stuck with having to write a green football until I could come up with an excuse to evolve. Besides, I thought a baby Roselia to be far more adorable
I've only heard of May Day before (I'm assuming it's a strictly European thing), so I must ask if this is based on actual celebrations
Yes and no. I don't think May Day really found it's way over to the US - if I were to speculate, it's probably because the Puritans didn't like those kinds of celebrations very much. They're fun, for a start. This version of May Day, as Flaze-kun noticed, is something of a pastiche. May Day is mostly a Christian folk festival these days (And therefore mostly celebrated because it's quaint), but it has a lot of the trappings of other ancient celebrations. Historically it is very much a celebration for the commoners, and as such always had plenty of dubiously-Christian symbols wrapped up in it. Because, frankly, humans have always wanted a way to celebrate that time of the year when things are growing again and with any luck everyone will have enough to eat.
I've based May Day and Eostre largely on Neopagan celebrations of May Day, or Beltane. The headdresses (Especially the horns), the drums and the bonfires are all very Neopagan. So is the lamb (Symbol of new life) and the circle, more or less. The sexual imagery linked to the new season, that too. The layout of the shrine is pretty much Shinto. I think I made up that bit about the handmaiden's kisses. Oh, yeah, and the Horned King isn't much different from the archetypal Horned God/Green Man, though I personally suspect that that archetype is quite a young one.
really really liked the Clefairy variation you thought up, it was actually kind of unsettling to imagine too.
Thank you, though I can't really claim much credit. It's based on a series of Clefable subspecies I found on tumblr. I had originally adapted a lot more from that art, but ironically the one I didn't change much made it's way in.
Eve's are more subtle about
Haha, well, she got interrupted, now, didn't she
though maybe you had it go for a bit too long
That was a concern, believe me. Originally I had the battle run from start to finish - at that rate I was going to end up with a chapter verging on 8,000 words. I didn't really want to cop out and rush the May Day celebrations since that forms a break in the relentless battles, so, there it is. In hindsight I'm not so sure as to whether I really should have done the May Circle, but as you say, it does bring the focus firmly on Eve
Right now I can't think of anything that bothers me (I'm not much of a mechanics reviewer), so I'll continue reading as you continue.
Thank you, and thank you! For the record, I really do find all comments useful, praise or criticism, so really don't worry