GAME: The Review Game

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Here it is. Rock you like a hurricane.

The latest chapter of my fic is now a thing, featuring things not originally planned, lots of worldbuilding, a plot hook from the past returning, and more. A lot of it just came to me. And it's intended to be the beginning of a shift in things. I wonder how it turned out...?

 

[chaos_Leader]

The latest chapter of my fic is now a thing

Done and done!

After months of accidental exile, I've come and reared my scatterbrained head and posted a new chapter at long last. As always, I'll take a complete, well-thought-out review for any portion of the story, but the most recent would be most appreciated. Thanks!

 

[GastlyGibus]

After months of accidental exile, I've come and reared my scatterbrained head and posted a new chapter at long last. As always, I'll take a complete, well-thought-out review for any portion of the story, but the most recent would be most appreciated. Thanks!

Mother Hen to Eagle's Nest, Mother Hen to Eagle's Nest, the review has been received, I repeat, the review has been received, over.

Now, for my request, I've finally started getting into the real nitty-gritty of the plot in my own story, which is right here. I feel the story is short enough to warrant a full review, but if not, then I'd specifically like a review done on the chapters 6 and beyond, as that's where things start to pick up and the plot begins to be made manifest. Specifically, I want to know about my overall writing style, descriptions, story-elements and such, but any kind of in-depth review is greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance!

 

[Beth Pavell]

Here is the review for Ghosts of the Past

For my part, let's see, I'd like one for Chapter Twenty Five - Evelina's Anvil

 

[lucarioknight56]

Here you go Beth!

I'd like to see a review for my eleventh chapter of PMD: Legends Unraveled, although if you haven't read this before--and if it isn't too much trouble--could you read all the current chapters?

 

[Ereshkigal]

Here ya go!

And, I'm hoping I can get a review of Multiple Dimensionality on how I'm doing on description so far. I've been trying to adjust the pacing of it after the first review.

 

[UselessBytes]

Here ya go Ereshkigal! Hope my rambling helps.

As for me, I'd love my story Real Fear reviewed. Thanks in advance.

 

[AceTrainer14]

@UselessBytes Here's your review

I would love a review on the most recent arc of Eight Easy Steps (this chapter onwards). At the very least I'd appreciate a review of the most recent chapter, but if someone hasn't reviewed for a while, I'd like to know what you think of the more slower paced arc.

 

[lucarioknight56]

@AceTrainer14 Review ready!

I would like a review for the entire story of PMD: Legends Unraveled, but if that's not possible, that I would at least like a review for Chapters 26 through 29, maybe 30 as well if you don't mind reading more than 10,000 words.

 

[diamondpearl876]

Review posted. 8)

I'd take a review on any of my current fics, really. Flying in the Dark is probably the longest fic I'm updating so far, and I'd prefer comments specifically for the two latest chapters of that fic if possible. Otherwise, feedback on any and all chapters of Love and Other Nightmares or Phantom Project would be appreciated.

 

[canisaries]

Posted!

I'd like a review on Agápe, either on any singular part from part 3 onward (including part 3 itself) or, if you want a longer option, everything posted so far (which might end up being the full fic, depending on when you're reviewing). I'm especially interested in your impressions of Red as a character, since it's something I'm working on.

 

[Beth Pavell]

Done and done

I would like a review of the rewritten Prelude and Chapter One of The Long Walk (Absolutely less than 10,000 words)

 

[Arkadelphiak]

P A V E L L M O I F R I E N D O

I would be totally thrilled with a review of The Deprogramming as a whole, considering it's only three chapters.

 

[chaos_Leader]

P A V E L L M O I F R I E N D O

I would be totally thrilled with a review of The Deprogramming as a whole, considering it's only three chapters.

I did it!

As for myself, I've recently updated a new chapter of A Sine of Things to Come, which can be found here.

 

[jasonwolf]

I did it!

As for myself, I've recently updated a new chapter of A Sine of Things to Come, which can be found here.

Tada

If anyone would be daring enough to dig through my fic Pokemon: Decolonized, more specifically Chapter 3: Faded I would be very thankful.

 

[lucarioknight56]

Here you go!

Alright, so I would like a review for Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles. I would like to ask for the entire Act to be reviewed, but knowing that that is strenuous to many, I'll ask for the first two or three, or the last two or three, or both if you want to. I just haven't gotten any reviews for it yet, so I'd appreciate any feedback.

 

[canisaries]

Finally done! Part 1 Part 2

I'd like a review for any story in my misc TPP stories thread, though if you choose Night One, you should also read Prayer before it (which you don't necessarily have to review, Night One just makes more sense with Prayer read). If you're not comfortable with reading Mature stuff, though, you can choose any two adjacent chapters from my other fics Dear Nemesis (Teen) or Agápe (Teen, some Mature chapters).

 

[Beth Pavell]

A']MATURE: - Miscellaneous TPP stories review of What the Cat Dragged In[/url]

I'd like a review of Chapter Twenty Seven of The Long Walk

 

[Flaze]

Well, here's your review for Chapter 27 of The Long Walk. I even went the extra mile and added my thoughts to chapter 26, you're welcome

As for me. I'd like for a review on the chapters currently out for Because You Were There. It's only two, relatively shrot chapters, so hopefully it isn't too much trouble.

 

[chaos_Leader]

Done and done.

As per usual, the latest chapter for A Sine of Things to Come would be excellent, but I'll be happy to hear from earlier chapters if you'd prefer.