Well, awards are over so it's time for some Award Reviews.
Here's my thoughts on the fic as a whole.
Plot
Love and Other Nightmares isn’t a story that concerned with being epic. Sure, we’ve got a protagonist that’s tied to an ambiguous destiny and it’s implied that the story will go on to...
DAMN IT DP WHEN ARE WE LEAVING SANDGEM
Okay, I'm just kidding, while it's true that Annie still hasn't left, she's at least close to it and this chapter was actually really fun. I think I've said it ebfore, but what i like most about this remake is how you're able to get into Annie's head...
Bla bla bla, award judging, bla bla bla, I'll try to catch up with the one chapter I haven't read.
Love and Other Nightmares
Plot 4/10: It’s a serious take on a journey fic that places more focus on the character’s psychology and trauma. The plot is pretty much laid bare in the first chapter...
So...we're still at the hospital huh? Well that's complicated.
So first the good. Again, I have to reiterate that you're doing a lot better of a job with this version of LaON, the chapters flow a lot better and it's easier to keep track of everything going on, plus it allows us to get more of a...
Welp, talka bout an immersive chapter. I did see it coming that chapter 1 was going to be inside of Annie's head as she recovered since the prologue focused solely on Kyurem's story. Chapter 1 of the first fic I remember correctly was also mostly about Annie waking up but I think it covered...
I'm going to be honest. I don't want to be mean, I really don't, but I kind of feel like the prologue was a little too long and it kind of went around things multiple times. I mean like how you explain when Arceus created the world then explain how Kyurem met the twins and what it all meant...
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