Interesting, a new capture in a Machop. I wasn't expecting that, but I was expecting Whitney not to be at her gym. Gym Leaders always seem to be doing something when Ash first comes to challenger them so, nice touch.
The characters are portrayed pretty close to their original anime...
Sure, I'd love to be tagged. I am intrigued and want to continue reading, if that's okay with you.
I understand and actually like the script like format of the story. My story that I'm focusing on now is full of description which some may say could be too much. I have actually toned down...
Firstly, congratulations on gaining March's Fic of the Month. This is a creative retelling of the Johto series and the AU aspect with the musical overtones really is intriguing. Your stories are really quite inventive and I have read a few of them myself, including Pokemon Island Sun. It's nice...
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