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Thanks, @Ghostsoul, for the review, and thanks for reminding me about the formatting, I've been meaning to get to fixing that.

Thanks for the critique! I think I understand the description critique a bit better now, having gotten more context, and I think I know what causes this for me. It's probably the result of me being a comic strip artist, and a bit of a lazy one at that. I don't often put a lot of thought into the...

--- Part 6: It Ends [FINALE] AJ made his way back to the living room. Red wasn’t there, but there were still some noises coming from the kitchen. AJ sat down on the couch. “Where are you now?” Burrito asked. AJ groaned under his breath, then hesitantly leaned towards his lap. “That’s not a...

time for another update bois n gurls -- Part 5: Playing Along “You know, I still don’t like this,” Gator growled. “Wow, really? I definitely couldn’t already tell by your constant griping,” Burrito muttered. “It’s just… creepy,” Gator continued, crossing his arms. “He’s so much older than...

Nother update. Something you oughtta know: Evan is the protagonist of Twitch Plays Pokémon Anniversary Crystal. He released (killed, in TPP terms) many Pokémon, including multiple Omanyte/Omastar. At the end of his journey, he merged with the glitch entity, Olden, and is now a considerable...

another part. enjoy. --- Part 3: Confessions It was cold. Cold and dark. AJ tried to get up, but when he rose slightly, his hands were pulled back. He looked behind him. His wrists were securely chained to the wall with rusty, heavy fetters of iron. He looked at his surroundings. A gloomy...

Thanks for the warm welcome! It's pleasant to receive critique so quickly. I may not personally see the importance of location detail, since it doesn't seem all too relevant to the story and less is more and all that, but I guess in a more interesting setting than "normal house" that would be...

ATTENTION (4 Aug 2017): This fic is currently being reformatted (and possibly slightly revised in other aspects too, based on the critique I've gotten) because first time round I was a stupid doggo and unaware of proper formatting rules, and only now I've realized the original looked like Clippy...