GAME: The Review Game

[diamondpearl876]

yes bae

Umm. Trying to get back into the writing spirit, so I'd prefer a review of one of my three main active fics (LaON, FitD, or PP), please! Links in sig. PP is a sequel, as a forewarning, but can be appreciated on its own. I'd prefer comments on something that isn't the prologue if that fic is picked. ^^ Thanks in advance~

 

[Ambyssin]

So if I'm reading the rules write, it's been three "turns" so I can jump in. If not, mods can delete with my apologies.

Enjoy me nerding out about neurology and oh yeah there's pokeymanz here, too.

Only have one active story, so if some kind soul would like to give Guiding Light a peak (click the banner in my sig or right here) I'd be ever-so happy. Any chapter is fine, though I'd prefer one of the later ones as they have no feedback whatsoever at the moment.

 

[kintsugi]

So if I'm reading the rules write, it's been three "turns" so I can jump in. If not, mods can delete with my apologies.

Enjoy me nerding out about neurology and oh yeah there's pokeymanz here, too.

Only have one active story, so if some kind soul would like to give Guiding Light a peak (click the banner in my sig or right here) I'd be ever-so happy. Any chapter is fine, though I'd prefer one of the later ones as they have no feedback whatsoever at the moment.

Aye aye, captain <3
I'm unfortunately not all caught up on the story + the process of writing up reviews while mobile is reaaaallly leaving me struggling against the chapter backlog I cleverly gave myself, but I'll be slowly dropping reviews on the remaining chapters and will get to the later chapters as the week progresses

I'd like to request a peek at Dungeons & Dragonite? It's v short and a way out of bounds for what I conventionally write, so I'd love to get some feedback on that.

 

[unrepentantAuthor]

Done!

I'd like a review of Different Eyes as usual. I should have chapter four posted within a couple days if you want to hang on until then, but the current stuff is fine to review! Cheers.

 

[Beth Pavell]

Done and done

I'm going to present a few options, for the sake of fairness. In descending order of preference:

• The revised version of The Long Walk prelude (The Green Road Into the Trees) - I would strongly prefer a review from someone who isn't familiar with this version
• Vermilion City, Pt. 2 of Kanto: There and Back Again - again, a new reviewer would be nice
• Special Chapter Twenty Three - Into the Wild of The Long Walk

 

[Arkadelphiak]

Blimey, Pavell: here's your review.

Could someone review one (or both) of the latest chapter(s) of The Deprogramming? I'm trying to gauge how well (or not, ayy) the comedy works and/or how well the mystery is unfolding.

 

[diamondpearl876]

here u go bae

Could I get feedback on the latest 1-2 letters of Flying in the Dark, please? Link in sig! <3

 

[Ambyssin]

One review of Letter 14, hold the fish sticks.

If it's not too much trouble, could I get a review of any chapter from 13 onward of Guiding Light. (Link in sig.) At this point I'm well aware of the flaws in the early chapters.

 

[kintsugi]

One review of Letter 14, hold the fish sticks.

If it's not too much trouble, could I get a review of any chapter from 13 onward of Guiding Light. (Link in sig.) At this point I'm well aware of the flaws in the early chapters.

piping hot and fresh

Could I get some feedback on some rise by sin? Either the most recent chapter (holy shit what) or whichever one you haven't read; I'm not really fussed.

 

[Beth Pavell]

voila, ma cherie

Again, options in descending order of preference:

Chapter Twenty Eight - St. Elmo's Fire of The Long Walk
Special Chapter Twenty Three - Into the Wild of The Long Walk

 

[AceTrainer14]

@Beth Pavell: One review for you.

I would like a review of one of the following options (in order of preference):
- Either of the most recent three chapters of Eight Easy Steps
- Any chapter of United We Stand (link in the signature)
- The most recent chapter of Dreams That You Dreamed
- If someone happens to be a newer reader, any thoughts on early Eight Easy Steps would be welcome. (Link in signature)

 

[Patrick Haines]

@AceTrainer14 Review is posted with the rest of Secret Santa

I would like reviewed (any of following)
-In depth review of Chapter 2 The Archsage War
-General overview of the first few chapters of The Archsage War
Thank you.

 

[InfiniteBakuphoon]

@Patrick Haines
Hi there! I'm interested in possibly reviewing one of your stories for the Review Game, but I'm a bit confused about which one you want to be reviewed. You see, it says here that the current story in the game is The Archsage War, but on the rulebook and information hub page, it says that it's actually The Legend of Ampharos. So with that said, I'd like to ask: which of these two would you like to be reviewed?

 

[Patrick Haines]

@Patrick Haines
Hi there! I'm interested in possibly reviewing one of your stories for the Review Game, but I'm a bit confused about which one you want to be reviewed. You see, it says here that the current story in the game is The Archsage War, but on the rulebook and information hub page, it says that it's actually The Legend of Ampharos. So with that said, I'd like to ask: which of these two would you like to be reviewed?

I would prefer Chapter 2/3 of The Archsage War

 

[Misfit Angel]

You see, it says here that the current story in the game is The Archsage War, but on the rulebook and information hub page, it says that it's actually The Legend of Ampharos.

Oops, that would be my mistake. I haven't been checking back to see if the request changed at all. I'll make a note to do that in the future.

 

[canisaries]

Reviewed the second chapter of The Archsage War. I hope I didn't steal it from anyone meaning to review it, but this had been up for quite a while.

I'd like a review for my oneshot HIM, but as it's rated mature and deals with some heavy themes, I'll also accept a review of the teen-rated Alternate Prologue to Hunter, Haunted.

 

[Patrick Haines]

Reviewed HIM. It is posted.

I would like reviewed
-In-depth analysis of Chapter 3: The Archsage War (preferred)
-General overview of The Legend of Ampharos (if someone has finished it)

 

[Beth Pavell]

@Patrick Haines you need to wait three turns before posting a new review request

 

[Patrick Haines]

@Patrick Haines you need to wait three turns before posting a new review request

Aww, bummer, I missed that. Sorry.

 

[The Desert Cat]

So, what story is currently up for review? Can I go ahead and review Patrick's since nothing else is pending? Thanks.