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  • Well, Kale is pretty believable as a character, yes. An aspiring young trainer that wants to be the best that they can -- the twist on the parents wanting to have their kid stop on that could have been written out more to add onto what else that goes with character development on all three sides of the family :)

    Other than that, I believe you're doing a relatively good job with Kale.
    I'm actually impressed by all of them. Their personalities are all well defined and interesting. I guess the only one you could improve on is Lucas', but that might be just because he hasn't done much yet..
    I actually have your story up in a new tab right now X3;; *has been multitasking* .D.;; I probably shouldn't, but I've been working on reading your fic~

    Edit:

    *just realized how bad that sounded*

    ... *meant shouldn't be multitasking*
    Yes, eventually. It'll be about Olympus and another organization tied into them. It'll be good, you'll see. =)
    Hi! ^^

    I have the full versions of Born To Be A Winner (season 4 theme), I Believe ( Master Quest theme), and Unbeatable (Advanced Battle theme).

    Let me know if you still need these, and I will PM you the links. ^_^
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