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Thanks for your review! I realize it's a bit difficult to take seriously at all, so I appreciate you giving me serious input regardless of the story's silly tone. I concur that it's growing a bit repetitive, I'm playing around with ways to make it a bit fresher again and considering going back to the approach of the first couple of chapters (or playing with new formats entirely).
I wish I could remember the episode, but I'm sure there was one towards the end of DP when he would_not_stop doing that fist-raise thing (With accompanying fiwhip! sound effect)
YouTube- First Battle Ash VS Paul.mp4 - YouTube Is the sound effect at 0:07 the one you're talking about?
Hey, I was hoping whether you could please review a story of mine. http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/showthread.php?t=60890 Its a new story so far and there's been a lack of people commenting on their opinions of the story, so I was hoping you could take a look for me.
I was wondering whether you'll be able to review my fanfic, Pokemon LX. I apologise if the grammar and the descriptions aren't so good from the start- I was able to do only partiall editing due to lack of time so maybe the first 2-3 chaps are kinda... off. Anyway, I'll appreaciate any tips you give me concerning descriptions, characerisation, plots etc.
Not bad, quite elegantly written, some good thoughts have gone into the choice of words there. I rather liked the idea of Aiden compartmentalising his personae. If you plan to continue this, I would suggest thinking about ways to show why Aiden is the way he is, and how he came to choose the life he does have. The incident as a child gives some nice hints towards that, but I don't think it'll be completely satisfying if you leave it as hints