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  • They do, but they actually have things to worry about and bad memories in their past.

    Dustin wont. He's going to have always lived the high life and he doesn't have bad memories.
    well he is his own person. and you know Kyle takes James' personality over the top.
    He learned from James. Just like everything else, he idolizes James and he wants to be just like him.
    Alright. I went out last night and I got into a fight. Basically, some guys causing trouble when me and my mate were on our way home. Nothing too serious though, I'm not hurt and, sadly, I don't think they really are either.

    It's weird to think that you live so far away, you know. It would take me like a whole day to physically meet up with you. It's also weird thinking that I've never seen the faces of all the people I've met on here. Weird.
    Just the length of the chapters, i usually don't like ones that last too long in any fic, so its not yours personally. However, of late your chapters have seemed to improve, as your not dwelling too long on parts that aren't majorly important, whereas in earlier chapters it certainly made it diffucult to read when it seemed that things were unimportant were getting a lot of page space. Your newer chapters have certainly been better to read, or at least I've found them easier to read.

    An when I asked about the arc i was wondering do you have it all planned out? What you want to achieve, what characters do what etc, or do you just improvise as you go along?
    erm....
    There's no real glaring problems tbh, it's not perfect but no fic ever is.
    Sometimes the chapters drag a little too long for my liking, but that's just me, some people prefer longer chapters. Also, I mentioned this before when you have battles which involve more than just 2 pokémon, sometimes its hard to tell whats happening, but as I haven't wrote one of them I couldn't give you any real advice on how to improve it tbh. Then of course there's grammar, which everyone is constantly trying to improve, and very few fics I read have no mistakes in.

    On a general note, don't set a release day for your chapters, or if you do, don't stick to it religously if you need to take more time on a chapter. If you let people know that it will be a bit later due to the fact it needs more work, they shouldn't really mind. Speed doesn't beat quality.





    How's the work coming on the next arc?
    Hey up dude, I don't know if you saw my message (It looks like you just had a mass of VM's :p), but there's a new chapter of Seasons out if you would care to take a look for me, cheers :)
    Yeah, I doubt the shells are durable enough to repeatedly strike metal for too long. And now my mind has been put to rest about those Koopa I left bouncing around.
    Thanks. Btw, what do you think happens to Koopas you leave bouncing between two pipes in Super Mario? I mean, Travelsverse Mario goes back with some Toads and stops them, but what happens to the game ones?
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