Sorry man, I only noticed your message there now :S
I've finished the prologue, and although it's not perfect, I really like it. The grammer can be a bit off at times, but everyone makes mistakes. I love the pacing, which actually reminds me of Harry Potter a little bit, and you've captured the essence of an actual school really well.
Also, I had no idea Rhyhorn could learn Thunderbolt before I read your fic. You learn something new every day
I've finished the prologue, and although it's not perfect, I really like it. The grammer can be a bit off at times, but everyone makes mistakes. I love the pacing, which actually reminds me of Harry Potter a little bit, and you've captured the essence of an actual school really well.
Also, I had no idea Rhyhorn could learn Thunderbolt before I read your fic. You learn something new every day