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  • I stated it as (From) the Other Side of the Earth so you know you could include the from or not. Same for the s on the end of the other title.

    You shouldn't obsess too much over chapter length. Just decide on a lower and upper word limit but there should be a lot of space between them. Just state what you think the absolute minimum a chapter can have and still be worth reading is and then do the same for the maximum.
    That's a pretty cool plot idea. I expect this is set after GSCHGSS then?

    Terry is a good name. Sons of Earth would just be too confusing with Ryuu's Son of Earth, particularly since his fic also centres around Silver.

    Title suggestions:

    'Brother From Another Mother' - bit of a silly one but Silver and Terry are literally brothers from other mothers.

    '(From) The Other Side of the Earth' - with Giovanni being the 'Earth' because he is a Ground trainer. Silver and Terry are from opposite sides of the Earth.

    'O Brother, Where Art Thou?' - named after the film.

    'Brothers in Harm(s)' - not sure this makes any sense, but it's a take on Brothers in Arms

    I hope at least one of them is of some use. Anyway, I'm going to bed now. Speak soon.
    If you have trouble with commas, I think I good way of deciding where you should put them is reading out a sentence and then seeing where you would pause to take a breath.

    Is this gonna be a series then? It sounds like a series. I've got a wicked name - 'Sons of Earth'. Seriously though, don't call it that.
    Message 1:

    That was a nice story but I was really expecting Darren to spend Christmas with Miko! It worked though. The only problem was comma usage. Sometimes commas were used unnecessarily and other times they weren't used where they should have been.

    That sounds like a really cool idea. You should write a one shot about it.

    I'd imagine them as half brothers - sons of Giovanni by different women. Perhaps Giovanni had another family outside of Silver's mother. Or perhaps Silver's mother was the other woman. Does the other one have to be the second one? Perhaps Silver could be the younger of the two.
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    Also, why do they meet each other? Perhaps they meet each other at Giovanni's funeral? That would certainly be interesting. Do you think they'd know about each other before they met each other? The story could still work if Silver and the other boy both knew of each other's existence before finally meeting.

    What kind of perspective would you tell it from? Silver's perspective? The other son's perspective? A mix of both? A switch?

    I look forward to reading that fic if you ever write it.

    Have you read my story? If so, what did you think?
    There was an extension to Christmas Eve to match the other competitions.

    Whatever. It doesn't affect me, I got mine done aaaaaaages ago. It's not like the winner will get their prize any later!
    Let's not dick around with that. I have time to read it now so I'll go and do that and tell you what I think.

    Read my one if you have time please =)
    Cool, I read the first bit of it but I've been a bit busy recently so I didn't read the whole thing.

    Gosh... I'm busy all the time nowadays aren't I? I hate it.
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