Flaze

So who's your favorite Pokemon character

Yeah it's pretty funny when Dawn yells at Paul when he was training Chimchar and he just rolled his eyes

I managed to put a little more into my chapter

Yes and that reminds me of something like a possibility of Shinji being paired up with Hikari then what would happen?

That was one of my favorite parts of the anime when Satoshi took in Shinji's Chimchar

Funny what Pikachu said at the end, also nice avatar

yes that's what I figured but I thought that last part was insulting

yeah let's be friends

It's going great and you might see some funny parts in the fic

Excellent thanks, and you?

Hey guy. Are you the on who writes that story everyone keeps giving suggestions on? I think the story could be pretty good. Just take some time and write a short chapter trying to use all of the advice you were given, and work from there. If you do that, you'll have a good fanfic