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  • Well, it's still a bit of a problem in your chapters as well, but I'm not going to comment on that too much when I do review your fic. I just want to say, though, that commas in English work much the same as they do in Spanish. :x You don't want big runon sentences in Spanish, either. While I'm not a native speaker like you, I've been learning it for a few years and I have a somewhat decent idea of how it works. You don't just keep dropping commas whenever you feel like it. :/
    I guess you're right, and I'm quite sure you made the right decision in stepping back from it all like you did, and it shows that you've learned something.

    (You still have basically the same problem that you did back then with runon sentences, though. :/ The second part of that VM was all one enormous, messy, comma-splicin' monstrosity.)
    It was a Brick Joke, as mentioned in the thread, and you changed it to make it sound like A.D was threatening Reggie.
    Several things, though reading the DR Chapter, I couldn't help but noticed you messed up a joke of mine ;^;
    Ah. Well, it's mainly a story of revenge. In the setting, which is some kind of high tech feudal Japan or something, there are two headbands. The person holding Number One is considered to be a god, and only the one holding the Number Two headband can challenge them. Unfortunately for the poor sap who has the Number Two, anyone is allowed to challenge him, granting them a chance to try for the big prize. The main character's father was killed in one of these conflicts and he's now become the Number Two, hunting the man who killed his pappy.

    If you decide to watch it, however, well, you probably will have some doubts about the behavior and character of the protagonist.

    The series was five episodes, and it's got a movie follow-up.
    Ah, well someone'll give you it eventually. I can't NOW, because people'll see this and presume you've been influencing votes :L
    Three? Hunh, would've expected 1, aka the one who nominated him.

    |3 Chuck Norris? If that were the case, I'd have Game Freak wanting to use him :L

    Awesome.
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