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  • Oh. That means there was a 404 error - 0000free.com is the name of my webhost.

    Hold on, that's another problem altogether >_>
    Huh. Can you try again and see what happens?

    The_Noob had a similar problem, and I fixed it for him.
    Yeah I wanna have a clear view of around how many it would be taking the plot into account and seeing how far I can take it.
    Yeah that's what I thought for the beginning, but I decided I might do it later on. I still have to think of how many chapters the fic could have probably 20 or so and I'll reveal Terry's true intentions in chapter 10
    Or how powerful and deluded he really is underneath, I was planning on making him look like a good guy turning TR into a group that helps people and doing a lot of good acts while he puts his real plan in motion.
    I know right, plus it's the person most people expect, though she doesn't really have a big role in the story, if all I might have Terry kill her out of revenge for seeing her as the person that stole his father.
    Well, going with popular belief I'm gonna go with Arianna XD though that does sound better.
    Good point, I decided another way, first I'm gonna have Silver describe the people and surroundings and act annoyed at the fact he's stuck doing a speech before the burial according to the will.
    Like describing the atmosphere and the people in it and what they're doing, but then how can I help them find out it's Giovanni's funeral?
    Oh and I'm gonna start writing that story I told you about Silver's unknown older brother

    *dum dum...dum!*
    I liked the battle between Blue and the Scientist it was entertaining.

    With this battle I had one of Reggie's Pokemon evolve at the last minute then made it seem like he was gonna win before making his opponent's Pokemon evolve as well, I know two evolutions seems a bit overdone but I didn't want to give Reggie an edge.
    Well they're sort of entertaining as well and it's where I shin I mean my normal description is normal but my battle description is probably my best feature maybe even better than Legacy's, the problem however is coming up with awesome strategies that'll keep the reader hook not just that but I also have to like them.

    Though this chapter wasn't as hard, Reggie facing up against his friend Fin/Fang who was revealed to be Lance's son and sole purpose in life is to get out of his father's shadow (he mutually hates him really)


    You just need confidence now, and wait to see if your story gets picked up or not.
    Where are you sending them off to.

    I'm finishing up my chapter of Dragon's Roar, the problem about writing a chapter that is only about a battle is that you have to think of strategies for them.
    Yeah that's sorta what I've done with Skyridge, only it's not entirely possible that my character won't go on to collect more badges. I don't suppose you have any idea what said events might be, or is that looking too far ahead again?
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