First of all i thought that it was ridiculus ok there was absolutley no emotion the whole time he sounded like a robot thats what it was to my knowing.
Second in your prolouge you said you love skateboards then later you say you hate them thats incosistency.
Third in the story the...
Granted but now they'll be starting a " beat every kid who gets and F on a paper till they bleed system."
I wish that they made an all powerfull pokemon card that will never die and cant lose.
this is my adventure so far in dungeons and dragons so far thought you'd like it as a fan fic.
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Starsin slowly walked up to the fort to which he'd been staying for several months now as a mercenary.As he reached...
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