Jersey Jimmy

Yes, but as I say, between beta'ing for two, writing my own, and my usual reading I'm just tapped for time

Something I want to highlight later is that Josh's approach works well with sufficient time and information, but the reason why Eve is a better trainer is that her approach is more holistic. It almost doesn't work vs Bradshaw - if Bulbasaur's ability had been Chlorophyll rather than Overgrow he'd have lost

Quick responsesss, aha, yes, the onsen scene. I think my favourite bit was Josh telling Casey to sod off. I didn't want to overuse Bradshaw , since he's a walking cliché. The original plan called for a lot more of him, not one of my better ideas

Having a character limit for profile posts kinda sucks, especially when you're reviewing a fanfic through them so you don't clog up the thread. This is why I don't like Twitter.

I suppose so. I'm rather fond of a bit of trippiness here and there. Originally that chapter was going to take place at the Ruins of Alph, I think

Bwahaha. I think I've annoyed nearly every reader with that dream sequence now. I tried to translate it into French once, as well

Fourteen was short. About, oh, 2,000 words I think. I never quite got the pacing of those few chapters right, though I certainly stand by the progression of the two protagonists. I dunno, maybe I just feel like there aren't enough poké-protagonists with common sense

I fear you may be disappointed if you're after erm

I can't really take on any more beta reading at present. As it is I'm reading for two stories

Hah, only about seven chapters to go then!

I shan't be doing any more review exchanges for the foreseeable future

Erm. Ah, that would be Chapter Twelve you last reviewed

I feel like I'm having a fever dream.

Regarding the Capture Spear - as far as I recall it used to be part of a sub-plot about Josh not being able to pitch worth a damn, playing around the oddity that no-one seems to outright miss when throwing a Poké Ball. Josh being Josh, he was going to simply make a tool to solve the problem rather than constantly practice. I think I cut the sub-plot for space and repurposed the idea. Oh, hang on ... it's possible it may have been inspired by Pokémon Special

I couldn't watch it :< I appreciate it tho ^^ I will try to catch up next time!

At what time? I wanna watch!

Does it have a good quality?

Amazing o.o You really are a fan, and I bet you are a long time fan!. I am not gonna lie I just watched WWE and UFC since it's what airs there. >.>;

YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH THAT'S WHAT I AM TALKING ABOUT!!!

You a wrestling fun huh? Besides Hardy is there any other?

*brofists* Thank you thank you *bows*
Where's mah beer truck??

Poor geezer, guess he had to kick the bucket somehow.