I'm glad you thought my tips were so helpful. ^^ I'll try to give your story another read soon, though I have seven Grades left to do in around four hours, so I'm not sure if I can fit it in now. But I will read through it again, rest assured.
Hey, Joshy. I figured since I'm doing this binge and everything that I should ask you: did you want me to give your story a Grade? I know Seq's got it claimed, and everything, but with everyone else's stories getting Graded and yours being one of the oldest on the list, I figured you were kind of getting left out of the deal. Let me know, all right?
Nope. :O All of that is your choice, just as long as it's good for the grader. Even if you fail, you'll still get the mart mons (and TMs), since graders let you edit the stories and get it re-graded. ^_^