I don't think anything needs to be changed, honestly. The dialogue in some parts seems a little rushed and ordinary...but I feel bad saying that because your fic is seriously superb, it's just the only thing I might change. Seriously though, don't change too much about it.
Koop, I dunno if you'll get this, but we all liked you a lot. I hope you'll maybe reconsider leaving and come back to hang with us. Me, Mitch, Chaos, Matt, we all miss you already.
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