pikachu200

yeah he tends to be like that, I don't really know him but his kinda of a critic.

ta da all done, by the way I just read your last chap it was good, about waht optimatum said; don't worry he says that to everyone, he said that to me.

Your right they are pretty funny, you should probably take a break, you know save a few chapters for later. But it's getting better especially with the poke subs, and as I said every fics gets better by the time just like mine did, and your did.

By the way you think we could be friends.

Hey, how have you been, how's your fic going. Sorry I haven't review yet; I was catching on my own fic, but I will reply soon.

I singed up

I can battle you as a gym leader.

Yes yes I would

In the Rp, do you wish to meet a pokemon in the tall grass?