If theres anyone out there that would like to be a beta reader for me
I would be eternally greatful (Does that conjure images of Toy Story or what :D)
I mostly just need help with grammar, but if they would be up for me bouncing a couple ideas of them, that would be good as well
After his battle with Forest at the Pewter city gym, Rob had decided that a couple days of rest and relaxation were in order for his Pokémon, while for him, it was more a chance for some realisation. Rob thought he must have gone over what Forest had said to him a hundred times by...
Re: How Fast Should a Good Journey Fic Go?
I think the simple answer is also what do you enjoy writing most.
If you want it to have a slow pace to focus on character development, then thats what it should have.
How ever if you think you would get bored of that, then obviously you want it to...
Dante froze to the spot, seeing the massive weight from above coming down on him. If to mimic his Pokémon Rob was shocked just as much as his Pokémon. The sight of this close to 900lbs goliath simply falling towards his tiny Pokémon left Rob with no idea what to say.
A new day has dawned over Kanto, as appearing out of the Pokémon centre early in the morning with the sun just rising is Rob. It’s taken a couple of days, but Arson managed to recover from his poisoning by the Beedrill. Rob himself has also recovered quickly, having already...
As my storyline is set several years after the anime and the original game series
I was wondering do you think the gym leaders should developed, past the stage of Forest (Instead of Brock) still having a geodude that can only basically use tackle.
Or would it be more realistic/entertaining...