+the priests and the flower girl+
That is the road to Heaven, my love,
and that is the road to Hell.
And that is the road to Faery,
where you and I must dwell.
-Thomas the Rhymer
Your best hope would be to de-personalize what follows
and not to look upon me as
a foe
or yourself as
a victim...
In which the victims of fate get a little pissy.
rating
PG-13ish for language, violence, and... intensity...?
notes on the headings and chapter titles
All are random, sporadic things that you may or may not have seen before (but probably not)(unless it's TS Eliot, who everyone's seen)(I WOULD...
They make me happy, too. XD
Random dude I met at a thing...
No Fur. No idea what it's supposed to mean, because it's definitely not an anti-fur statement. ...There's a monster standing there with a razor, completely furless and looking awkward.
This could prove to be interesting. A useless trainer with the bad luck to get mixed up with talented folks looks to be the premise? Your character's strong enough, development wise, to get quite a bit of writing fun out of the idea. Intriguing. I'll keep my eye on this.
Pity this hasn't gotten a bit more attention than most of the other fics circulating about here. It's certainly better written than much of it, and has a far more coherently executed preliminary plot structure. I'll be looking for future installments. Nice job. :D
(Btw, you have some funky...
SEE? I know what I'm doing. Everything got woven together far more coherently and epicly after the additions. AND YOU WOULDN'T HAVE DONE 'EM IF IT WEREN'T FOR ME.
...Wanted to bust a cap, did you? >_> <_< >_> >_> >_>
There's something... off-kilter about this story's plot, y'know? No idea what it is, but HIPPOPOTAS NOT CAPTURED UNTIL YOU FIX IT. >_>
...Baha. Um. YOU KNOW I LOVE THIS STORY. <3 It's almost more awesome this time through.
[/not a halpful BMG commentator in the least]
A/N: Well. This is a bit older, as far as my works go. One of my personal favorites in my own works, as far as Pokémon is concerned. Cenotaph was initially intended for URPG, so the plot structure involves the direct capture of a Pokémon 'n whatnot. :o So, here's an idea of what shows up 'round...
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