Well, you didn't ask that bit last time. And that should be alright, as long as you fulfil the same requirements of reviewing the person before you, and do not be surprised if your review does not turn out exactly as you may have hoped.
I believe it says in the rules that you can ask for the whole story/anything you want, and the person currently waiting for a review asked for everything to be read I believe. It is your decision and I do not believe it is against the rules, but it should be noted that the longer the request, the longer the wait tends to be.
Indeed I have, I have just been at uni all day so I only got a chance to look over it now. It looks amazing! I don't have the time to read all of it soz, but I have read a bit and it is really detailed, very well written, so great job! I have given it to the other mods to glance over as well but it should be fine and be up pretty soon