I don't know really. Why don't you try writing out a long term plan for your story? That quite often helps - that way you're looking forward to getting to certain parts of the story and it gives your story a new life!
Mmk, I'm having trouble getting your main character right, messy hair being my mortal nemesis on sprites, so would the burnt in the center city with Nuclear Towers in the center and the title be ok? Hell, I've recalled a statement of noone being allowed near the city anyway.