szmty

It's your story, not ours, you can do whatever you want with it. Though I don't see why you don't want to post the revised version here as well.

Yes, you can post it; I did read over your prologue and it seems more like background information, so really you could post the two in the same post, but a separate one is fine - though perhaps put an index in the first post so it is a bit tidier.

Huh, you don't get to see many people from Mexico around here! I think we're the only ones, since the other one I knew got banned. Cool! I thought Pokémon was dead in Mexico, I don't ever see kids playing or talking about it anymore.