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  1. unrepentantAuthor

    TEEN: uA's "Different Eyes" 2012 Edition (Final Update: ch. 5)

    Thanks for reviewing this ancient nonsense, @diamondpearl876! I'm glad I dug it out after all. Your review mostly makes me feel vindicated that I decided to start the new edition off with Salem's pre-morph background. I feel more and more sure that it was the right narrative choice to make for...
  2. unrepentantAuthor

    TEEN: uA's "Different Eyes" 2012 Edition (Final Update: ch. 5)

    Thanks for this, @Ambyssin! I wasn't expecting to get a response to this, certainly not so soon. You're right that Salem is startlingly cognisant. One of the principle differences between the old edition and the new is how long it will take the morphs to pick up things like articulate speech...
  3. unrepentantAuthor

    TEEN: uA's "Different Eyes" 2012 Edition (Final Update: ch. 5)

    So, I was recently going through some old files and it turns out that I had an unpublished chapter of the 2012 edition of Different Eyes just sitting around in an old folder. When I abandoned this fic, a lot of things were going on in my life. I suppose I must have been too stressed out to post...
  4. unrepentantAuthor

    TEEN: uA's "Different Eyes" 2012 Edition (Final Update: ch. 5)

    Firstly, I'd like to say that this succession of reviews has left me stunned with gratitude and pride. Thank you everyone for turning my dearth of confidence into an abundance. Do you know, naming him 'proctor' was totally accidental? It was simply the first thing that came to mind. The...
  5. unrepentantAuthor

    TEEN: uA's "Different Eyes" 2012 Edition (Final Update: ch. 5)

    As much of a bitch as Dusk is, it was never my intent for her to be a 'bad character'. That's a little concerning. Has she been unlikeable up until now? Since the fic is mostly character/idea driven, plot is not a high priority. It's there, though. I've chosen to set up reasonably slowly...
  6. unrepentantAuthor

    TEEN: uA's "Different Eyes" 2012 Edition (Final Update: ch. 5)

    Re: uA's "Different Eyes" (Chapters: 3) Chapter Four “So… is this one Haze?” Salem asked. The white-coated scientist escorting the two morphs nodded. “Yes, he is,” she said. “I’m able to answer questions, which you will doubtless have.” Dusk smiled evenly. “When will he be morphed...
  7. unrepentantAuthor

    TEEN: uA's "Different Eyes" 2012 Edition (Final Update: ch. 5)

    Re: uA's "Different Eyes" (Chapters: 3) Thank you very much, it's helpful to have notable aspects brought to my attention. I'll endeavour to give more detailed description of some morphs, and tone down Nahan/Verity and their intellects, perhaps. As for Salem's pokéball, as the dream implies...
  8. unrepentantAuthor

    TEEN: uA's "Different Eyes" 2012 Edition (Final Update: ch. 5)

    Re: uA's "Different Eyes" My goodness, this stream of praise is the most significant boost to my dwindling ego of recent months. Thank you very much for your kind words. I'd hesitate to believe the introduction is genuinely 'epic' but I am extremely flattered you think so~ I'll take note of...
  9. unrepentantAuthor

    TEEN: uA's "Different Eyes" 2012 Edition (Final Update: ch. 5)

    Re: uA's "Different Eyes" "You begin to lose track of time in here," commented Dusk. "You should ask your counsellor for a watch. I'll teach you how to read it if you want." Salem nodded vaguely and continued to focus on the meal in front of her. She had spent most of the night being dragged...
  10. unrepentantAuthor

    TEEN: uA's "Different Eyes" 2012 Edition (Final Update: ch. 5)

    Re: uA's "Different Eyes" Thank you for your response, Jinoga, I appreciate the praise. I make a conscious effort to distinguish my work and I'm glad I've had some success so early on! The fic may contain anthropomorphic characters and transhuman concepts but it is not at all part of 'furry...
  11. unrepentantAuthor

    TEEN: uA's "Different Eyes" 2012 Edition (Final Update: ch. 5)

    Final update: Chapter Five, 2018/05/29. Hi there. I wrote this fic about pokémorphs a long time ago. People liked it pretty well, and it even won some awards (to my great surprise!) I'm writing a new version now, (from scratch!) and I think it's much much better, but maybe some people will find...
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