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Re: Sunlight Bleak This is a really solid start to a story. You have given us a good chunk of both worldbuilding and characterization, and it's easy to get our teeth into both Ace and Flannery - Bravo! The repetition at the start is effective at setting the scene, though it borders on...

Well, what's new? One very well written chapter and a heart-warming aside (really loved that!!) - same old TLW!! Your last chapter was a real good read. You controlled the pace throughout and mixed humour with seriousness to great effect. Tyler is definitely a J-E-R-K, but for some reason he...

A very, very, very late congratulations to all involved in the awards!!! My lateness is shocking, nevertheless well done to all: contestants and judges :)

I think when it comes to fish it really depends on the author's personal style. Many fish Pokémon have been shown to laugh in the face of Newtonian physics - take Sharpedo's random floating in the anime as a vivid example. And, it's not hard to envision some aquatic Pokémon living outside of...

Re: Dawn of Darkness: Epilogue And I'm up to date - and so glad to be! To be honest, I'm a little sad the story is finished because I thoroughly enjoyed it! I have to agree with Panel that this is your best story, from what I've read of your extensive collection so far :) What I loved about...

Time to vote :) Best Reviewer: Beth Pavell Best Newcomer: VTP - Dawkins93 Best Written Word Contributor: LightningTopaz

Haigh!! Now this chapter, especially the opening, exemplifies what your brilliant at - descriptive detail and atmospheric setting! The camp site is brought beautifully to life and you offer a vivid and buoyant delineation of Josh's life with Eve and his Pokémon. Now, the balance then quickly...

Haigh! Well, it's great to see another chapter of this fantastic story being published and I can't wait to read more! Honestly, I really love this fic. What really gets to me about this story is your use of emotive language. Your protagonist can be very sarcastic - which I personally love...

WOOOO!! FINISHED AND UP-TO-DATE!! Well, that was one heck of a long time - but I really enjoyed it!! Firstly, when I first starting reading I was very worried about Chigon. Fake Pokémon can very easily ascend to god-like positions and finding ways in keeping an ancient, royal Pokémon who can...

Ok, seo linn!! Best Journey: How to Conquer Kanto in Eight Easy Steps The Long Walk Best Dark: Galactic Best Alternate: Vivillion Writes Poems Pokémon Academy Year II: Second Year Rhapsody Best Protagonist: Evelina Joy Scar Best Antagonist: Gideon Kevin Samuels Best Supporting...

Haigh!! A very impressive and highly arresting start to a fanfiction I can't wait to read more of! This is purely a slice of life, a description of a sliver in time and you still managed to pack it with a punch. Your prose is very succinct and flows with great pace, which coheres beautifully...

Haigh! I'm finally up-to-date! So, here's your up-to-date review: It was great to read more about Snivy and see his personality blossoming. As I said in my last post, I was a little off not hearing about him after Timothy picked him in Juniper's Lab, but that was all resolved in the following...

This is a really good example of what can be done with the Pokémon battle format and you have great potential to be able to carry a battle for so long, whilst keeping the reader's attention. Presenting us with the Champion's battle at the very beginning, as opposed to the regularity of it being...

Well - now that escalated quickly! Even, if it was a dream! This chapter has a very quick pace, which coheres with the tipsy, Blackthorn Spirit-induced state that Josh and Eve find themselves in. It feels a little breathless, with a lot going on, but once again, very well handled and some...

Woo Chapter update!! I really liked some parts of this chapter!! Your use of the email format at the beginning creates a wonderful sense of space, that characters can interact though there is great distance between them. Plus, we get to see a bit more of Imogen Joy's development too. And, while...

Awwww, I'm loving this story more and more every time you post a chapter! On a quick little tangent of my own, do I see a little relationship blossoming between Eve and Josh?? I mean, more than friendship?? Anyway - Firstly, since I don't think I've ever mentioned it before, you have a...

I couldn't agree more - a masterful display of control over some many different writing techniques! Especially the ending, a fabulously crafted study in deterioration. You hit the nail on the head when you said that some 'players' pour their own lifeblood - happiness, sadness, anger - into these...

Pure Psychic-Type: what are the chances!! I'll be bending spoons forevermore :)

A very interesting opening, now which starts with my favourite kind of beginning: a hook to grab the readers attention, a little something to chew on for the chapter, and then some mystery to keep them coming back. And, it's worked. I'm interested in your nameless pilot's backstory, I'm...

Mega Gallade, I love you!!! That's it!! Enough said - Look how cool he looks in that cape!!