So, progress on Chapter Two has slowed down to a crawl. Less than a crawl, really. Y'know what I said about deadlines? Screw deadlines.
I never anticipated how hard it would be to write the pokédex in a way that (hopefully) makes sense and seems believable to the reader. That is my crutch at...
This just reminded me that I once played around with the idea of a sort of one shot story set during a party or social event where all the legendary pokemon of the world were present but had a humanoid appearance that kind of reflected their design. I forget exactly whose perspective it was...
I generally struggle when it comes to chapter titles. Hell, I'm not even certain I want to use them in my fic. Besides, I haven't really settled on a name for the fic in general yet.
Author Name: Crimson&Gold
Fic Name: The Colours of a Champion
Summary: Academically unrivaled, Gwen Leif never predicted a journey across Kanto for herself. Yet when she comes into contact with the curious boy known as "Silent Red" she finds herself on one. As Red attempts to make his mark on...
As I write Chapter Two I have to wonder what your opinions are on the use or non-use of the"accent-e" in pokemon. I only ask because in the initial chapter I didn't use it, as I never really have done in the past either and its just a personal preference of mine to keep it off. I'm assuming...
Wow, that seems meticulous to say the least. I can't even imagine what it would be like to be writing a story of such a scale that it demands such a level of detail and attention.
Truth be told I'm not exactly someone who writes a lot of notes far in advance. That's not to say I don't plan...
Sorry for not posting sooner, I've been busy. Right now I only have the time to read the second chapter but I shall update this post later to include any of my comments on the third when I can get round to it.
A necessary albeit a bit of an elementary chapter however Jimmy remains an...
Finally made some real progress with Chapter Two of my fledgling story. I had already began writing last week but then a combination of moving back to Scotland for Uni as well as all the obligatory socalising that come with the new semester created a big distraction for me. Regardless I would...
First of all, thank you so much for reading and for your comment; it means a lot that anyone would bother to comment on my stuff at all, but your review is so structured and thorough that I have to at least offer you special thanks for it. I'll try and take all of your points (the good and the...
Thanks for reading, Treble.
Yeah as you say there are some definite spelling and punctuation mistakes. I'm playing around with the idea of a couple of minor tweaks to the first chapter that, by the time the second is ready to go, will probably be implemented. By then I'll hopefully have all of...
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