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I enjoyed this chapter mroe than the last two, largely as we got more backstory, more characters and the plot is moving along. The new characters you introduced sound look fun and you've got some good vibes going on here. The introduction of Ahote and Neka was interesting, and I'm intrigued to...

The first two chapters are nicely written and you have some diverse characters, but there isn't a lot on offer here. I enjoyed what I read, but there isn't really a hook or anything that makes me want to come back. The bit about Joshua's sister being injured/sick was intriguing - it would have...