Thanks so much for the feedback! This wasn't harsh at all, and I'm glad you actually pointed out some legit flaws like pacing issues and grammatical errors instead of nitpicky things like protagonist choices (I've had some people ditch my story entirely because I didn't pick conventionally cute...
This is Pokemon Crossing: Fly Me to the Moon.
General Info:
Crossover between: Pokemon and Animal Crossing
Setting: Hoenn region (ORAS continuity)
Rating: T+ (mild language and violence, alcohol usage)
Can also be found on: FF.net and Ao3
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