Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Ghosts of the Past
Plot 6/10: There isn’t much of a plot quite yet, it’s still building it up to it slowly, with chapters about discovering mysterious stones of different colors as well as chapters focusing on other external characters who are either villains or people...
So heads up, I'm basically just copy pasting what I wrote for the awards here dude xD
Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Ghosts of the Past
Plot 5/10: I’ll be honest, Ghosts of the Past only gets such a low score in plot because the story is still only 7 chapters long and just a chapter or two ago...
So, I read the first chapter back when you first wrote it so I'll skip over that and go straight into the second one.
To be honest, there's really not much I can say, I mean again I like the flow in your prose and description, it's easy to read and the way your chapter started was actually...
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