When Julie was younger and her grandfather wasn’t able to run the gym because of back pain, her father had to run it until he’s ready to run it again
Switched some words around to make it sound more past tense since it's talking about the past.
Julie is always a very nice person, she’s...
@TRNatalie Right now the store looks quite messy and hard to read, cleaning it up helps make it easier to read. @Beth Pavell pretty much said everything else that needs to be said about your story.
How is my story called "One Illness Changes Everything" looking so far? Is there anything that...
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