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Episode 7: Dawn of a New Day
After landing the ship near where Giratina struggled to get free, Ash threw on a respirator and climbed out. Please, Arceus--I hope I'm not too late! he prayed as Tintri, Shaymin, and Diddy looked on...
Thanks--it is intended to be read alongside of Shine Diamond, so I will put what the team lineups are in the first post, so you know who is who.
I will go through and fix any punctuation and awkward wording too.
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Episode 6: A Clash of Both Worlds
Ash's heart pounded as he led the group to where Giratina lay. "Oh no...no..." he groaned, fighting back tears when he saw Giratina's seemingly lifeless body.
Everyone heaved a huge sigh of relief as...
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Episode 5: The Origin of a Rescue
Shaymin elegantly jumped off of Ash's head and onto a rock facing Zero. If you're going to hurt my friends, you'll have to take me first.
Brock gasped as a couple of Magnemite grabbed Shaymin. "I don't...
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Episode 4: Pursued Between Worlds
Panic ensued on the train as a Magneton used Thunderbolt to shatter one of the train windows. [I have to stop them!] Shaymin gasped in horror.
She wriggled out of Dawn's arms, and crawled to the basket...
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Interlude: The Gracidea Express
For a while, the train ride was uneventful. Shaymin had found her way back to Dawn, and was now snoozing in her lap. Ash was enjoying the view of the plains rolling by his window, thankful that at least...
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Thanks for the review. I may go back and fix up those long sentences so they read clearer.
Be warned, this is not quite the same movie 11 that you remember!
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Episode 3: The Light Blooming in the Darkness
"Whoa!" Brock gasped as Ash and Dawn tumbled out of the statue in a heap. "Are you guys okay?"
"I think so..." Ash replied as he dusted himself off. "We were taken to this weird purply world...
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Episode 2: Brave New Distortion World
At the Pokémon Center, Nurse Joy studied the results of the battery of scans. "It appears to be reacting to the large amount of pollen in the air. This is why I have to wear safety glasses."
"So, an...
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Episode 1: Chaos Before Breakfast!
In the real world, Ash watched the Wingulls weave and whirl through the morning sky from a balcony. It's so peaceful out here...I could stay here forever... he thought as Tintri jumped aboard his...
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(rated E10+ for fantasy violence and frightening images)
Since the remix of movie 10 was well received, we continue the remixed D/P movie trilogy with a remix of movie 11.
Be warned: This is not quite the same movie you remember!
In...
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