You mean like the kamehameha? :P
You could treat aura similarly to chi, though. That would satisfy Beth's point to an extent, but also be somewhat in-keeping with the anime (I think, it's been forever since I watched the Lucario movie).
It sounds interesting enough, although I'm only vaguely familiar with the Galacticverse. I would personally go for the three act structure, although Gastly's Mama did the alternation structure with Dragon Days and that worked pretty well as I recall.
Obsidian, I'd say your vision of Xerneas feels like a Knight Templar, honestly. So dedicated to its cause, it cannot abide its opponent. It reminds me of certain darker interpretations of Primus, from the Transformers mythos. Primus is an ancient being who created the Transformers as an answer...
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