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On the whole, I really liked this chapter; it wraps up one part of the story and sets the stage for another. I'm still worried about Amara. With the way she was internalizing the guilt she felt, I feel like it'll take longer than just this one scene for her to really make sense of it all and...

(quick note: there are a few instances at the end of chapter 57 where you use "are" instead of "were" when the sentence is in the past tense.) I'll be honest: after reading the end of this chapter, I'm wondering if Amara will make it to the end of the fic. Her driving force for the entirety of...