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A debate on religion would go nowhere, but it has nothing to do with my criticisms. I've no issue with it or lack thereof personally anyway. But in the context of this fic, this is my issue: If you want to push your beliefs? That's perfectly fine. If you want to write a fic about them? That's...

Okay. Post rewards things. I'll start off with my chapter-by-chapter as I read them comments I make when reading through things. Don't know how much of it is valid with all the changes, though. C1 - Initial is confusing. I assume awakening is later explained - A bit strange to me to compare...