I have revisions!
With some very helpful replies from those that have taken a look before, I have done the tweaking.
At this point, I'm wondering if finding a beat reader should be the way to go instead. I more-or-less have the entire chapter ready to go, and I'm just putting the finishing...
The responses have actually been pretty helpful. In a more specific vein: yes, Peter's trepidation is weird and unusual, but it is part of who he is. He's a careful, detail-oriented expert in his field, and here is something most people take for granted, yet makes him feel like a bumbling...
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