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  1. diamondpearl876

    EVERYONE: Star Performer <Ch. 12>

    CHAPTER 7 This little gym battle ordeal between Xavier, Yvette, and Alex is... interesting, to say the least. You bring in an interesting dynamic in the sense that it's normal for trainers to bump into each other largely as strangers on the road. Alex blatantly points out he doesn't know Xavier...
  2. diamondpearl876

    EVERYONE: Star Performer <Ch. 12>

    Probs not gonna crosspost after all since you're still not caught up over there, and no point in making you wait for a review. :p You do a good job showing Alex's despair over losing. The lack of dialogue from the announcer works well, honestly, as does the lack of any dialogue at all. It...
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