Henlo, you wrote that you're accepting feedback, so I'll attempt to take a gander at this.
Prologue + Chapter 1:
This is a very PMD opening, for better or worse. There are the seeds of mystery, the realization of suddenly waking up as a 'mon, and some confusion throughout. I wouldn't call being...
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