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Adventures of My 'Deaf' Trainer ~Chapter 1~

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OK after the utter failure of my first fanfic I took the time to come up with a new more solid one. Characters, plot twists and even a good title.

Please give me your honest opinion I'm ok with harsh criticism as long as it's honest.

ENJOY!

Synopsis:
In the distant future, Pokemon have mutated, not to gain new physical features, but change in their type, according to the possibilities the are restricted within its egg group. Trainers would train in special guilds along with there partner Pokemon, to become a Meijin, and heal the mutated Pokemon so that unbelievably powerful Pokemon would not be born, Ex.(Dragon/Water Gyarados),and so that the natural environment would not be disrupted.

The story is about a Ralts named Rem who's trainer -Kenichi- is deaf, and their adventures with fellow Meijins Shinichi, Akane, Yuuki, Hikari and Yuki with there partner Pokemon, Grovyle, Maggie(Magby) and L(Elekid), Kurly(Kirlia), Light(Kirlia) and Froslass respectively.

Prologue​


“What’s taking him so long?”

She stood in front of the Silph co. building surrounded by many great skyscrapers in the center of Saffron City, waiting. Streaks of blonde glimmered through her long soft crimson hair. Wearing a red top and yellow pants, she faced the large screen that was positioned on the building with a concerned expression.

“Aka-chan, L is being mean.” the Magby jumped into her chest.

“Now Maggie,” she said, gazing at the Magby with her bright honey-yellow eyes. “L.” she demanded.

The yellow electric Pokémon walked towards her, the shape of a flame imprinted on his chest. “I was just trying to teach her thunderbolt.” He argued.

And now we present to you Yuu Gray, King of the newly formed Pokémon region.” the screen broadcasted, as she placed the Magby on the floor.

A middle-aged man appeared on the screen, tall. He wore a long, yellow stripped black coat, had a short trimmed beard, and dark black hair. His eyes were a dark shade of brown with a yellow iris.

Ever since we were born,” he began. “We were destined to work together, Human and Pokémon hand in hand.he paused. “ Years have past since the war of the previously divided Pokémon regions, since then nothing but peace come to pass ,but the outbreak of an epidemic, that threatened the existence of pure bred Pokémon world-wide, caused a huge disruption , as you all know when two Pokémon from the same egg group breed, their offspring is of the female parent’s species, but the result of the accumulation of decades and decades of interspecies breeding, was the consolidation of type gens from the male parent into the offspring, which would then add to, or dominate one of the offspring’s base types, this would have given birth to incredibly strong and dangerous Pokémon, however, thanks to the efforts of the 16 most experienced type specialists -‘Meijins’ if you will-, the problem was temporarily stabilized. Type guilds were built to train Pokémon trainers into becoming Meijins to achieve the ability that would qualify them to carry out the treatment. Scientists are still searching for a permanent cure…

She looked at her watch and sighed. “Not much time left, he’s going to miss the train.”

“Oh?” a sadistic smile was on the Magby’s face. “Is that really what you’re worried about.” She quipped.

She turned her blushing face. “What do you mean?”

“That’s enough Maggie.” L said, while she giggled.

*****​

He was running, gasping for air. His Grovyle gliding over him, its leaves shined a sharp green-blue in the sunlight. His dense cobalt hair waved through the wind as he looked over his shoulder to the Grovyle. “Can you see the train…Grovyle?” he asked, still running.

Grovyle nodded. “We have ten minutes.”

He smiled. “We have plenty of ti- whoa!” Still facing Grovyle he crashed into someone walking in front of him.

They both fell to the ground, he then got up and looked over to see a woman, but she looked unusual. She wore a long white dress with a red line that divided its top, and green sleeves that stretched to cover her hands. She had short green hair that extended to her cheeks, and two, an onyx and an amethyst eye, that seemed out of place.

He offered his hand. “Sorry about that, it was my fault. Let me help you up.”

“Oh, thank you.” She replied.

He looked at her again and asked. “Umm, you don’t look like you’re from around here are you?”

“I’m just here to see an old friend.” She smiled.

“Ok.” He paused, and when he finished gawking her Grovyle interrupted.

“Erm, Shinichi.”

When she noticed the Grovyle, she flinched neither of them noticed, but it didn’t seem it was because of Grovyle’s appearance, from the look on her face it was like she knew him.

“Yeah…”? he gazed at Grovyle for a moment. “Oh! We’re late. Sorry but I have to go.”

“Ok?” she said scratching her cheek with a sweat drop, and taking at last look at the Grovyle. “Nah can’t be.”

*****​

“There you are, you’re late.” She said fumingly.

He had his hand on his knees, catching his breath. He wore a pair of dark blue jeans and a green t-shirt with a blue leaf like pattern.

He faced her with shining emerald eyes. “We should get to the station.”

“Says the one who’s late!” she retorted.

“Sorry?”

*****​

When they got to the station, it was almost empty, which wasn’t surprising considering it was Tuesday. They sat on the bench next to a trainer with her Frosslass.

L tugged at his trainer’s ankle. “Akane, did you forget the reason Shin was late.”

She looked at Shinichi repentantly. “Shin, did you get to see your mother?”

He gazed at the floor. “Yeah.”

“And how was she?” she asked.

He looked up closed his eyes, lowered his head and shook it. Shinichi’s mother was the Guild master of the Celadon grass guild, and was on her death bed. There was nothing he could do to help her, not even becoming a Meijin. He had a job to do and couldn't stay.

“Shinichi, I-” she said ruefully reaching her hand.

“It’s Ok,” he sighed, then smiled. “I have two moms remember.”

They sat there in silence for a moment when the Frosslass that was sitting next to them interrupted.

“Excuse me Onii-san, if you don’t mind me asking. Where are you heading?” she used telepathy.

Shin chuckled. “Us, well were heading for Blackthorn city.”

The Frosslass looked at him in contempt, then smiled and asked. “Great, we’re going to Mahogany Town, would you mind if we tagged along? You see my trainer is too young to travel alone, even with me.”

Shin looked over to the girl sitting beside the Frosslass; she was short and had a weak build. She had white almost transparent hair; he looked at her eyes, white. “Psychic Meijins?”

“Yes,” answered the Frosslass, “We just finished training here at the Psychic Guild, and we’re going to the Ice Guild in Mahogany Town.”

“Alright then, we’ll help you out. Right guys?” he said cheerfully.

“Sure.”
“Ok.”
“Yeah.”

“How ‘bout you Grovyle?” Shin asked.

“Whatever.” said Grovyle in disinterest.

“Alright then it’s unanimous. Oh! We don’t know your name.”

“Yuki.” She said in a soft voice.

Just then did the train arrive. Shinichi got up. “Alright everyone, Ike!”

*****​

He walked up the long steps to his room, the place were he could see everyone, and everything. The door opened, opened to a room that exerted darkness. As he entered, his true form was revealed, a black gripper. Yellow eyes and a mouth glowed, bounded by two large hands. A halo crowned a single red eye which was encircled by what seemed like flower petals. He hovered to his cathedra; it was bejeweled with 14 differently colored plates that were arranged circularly around it.

He sat facing a large white screen. “Yuugure-sama, we have located her.” confirmed the kneeling Gengar.

“And the boy?”

“Ecruteak City.”

“Excellent.” He clipped. He gazed warily at the screen, “I will get what is rightfully mine.” He scowled. “Nowhere left to hide, my dear Gabi.”

The screen displayed two pictures, a boy in his early teens, gray hair that covered his eyes, and upon closer inspection, amethyst. He wore black pants and a purple t-shirt with a black tribal design. A Ralts with purple horns stood at his feet, on the other side of the screen the picture of a woman, the same woman that Shinichi had met earlier that day.
 
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Re: Adventures of My 'Deaf' Trainer

You should only end a quoted sentence with a comma when it is not the end of the non-quoted sentence. There are a few places where you're ending in a comma that don't really make sense.
 
Re: Adventures of My 'Deaf' Trainer

You should only end a quoted sentence with a comma when it is not the end of the non-quoted sentence. There are a few places where you're ending in a comma that don't really make sense.

OK, thanks. ^^ But what i really want to know is your thoughts on it.
 
Re: Adventures of My 'Deaf' Trainer

I didn't really understand what the chapter was about.
 
Re: Adventures of My 'Deaf' Trainer

I didn't really understand what the chapter was about.

Well, I guess it was a little vague but everything will be explained in the next chapter after all this is just the prologue I still didn't introduce the protagonist.
 
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Re: Adventures of My 'Deaf' Trainer

Its good, nothing to say here that I haven't told you at school.
Good description, introducing the characters is good and the dialogue is a huge improvement. But also you need to use less fancy words.
Honestly, "quipped", "clipped"? How about "said"? Writing talent isn't about having an awesome vocabulary, its about telling your story in way that makes it fun and exciting.
And no, the ability to use the synonym option on MS Word doesn't count.
But I'm not worried about you, you'll do fine. OR ELSE!
 
Re: Adventures of My 'Deaf' Trainer

Its good, nothing to say here that I haven't told you at school.
Good description, introducing the characters is good and the dialogue is a huge improvement. But also you need to use less fancy words.
Honestly, "quipped", "clipped"? How about "said"? Writing talent isn't about having an awesome vocabulary, its about telling your story in way that makes it fun and exciting.
And no, the ability to use the synonym option on MS Word doesn't count.
But I'm not worried about you, you'll do fine. OR ELSE!

Thanks man btw whats with 'Jinoga'
 
Ok here's the first chapter I hope this explains some things plus the protagonist is introduced ^^

ENJOY!

Chapter 1: Ghostly Combustion

Sitting in his cathedra, he placed his hand on the Iron plate. An Ogre Scorp Pokémon standing before him, its fangs framed its bloodcurdling expression, two purple, clawed arms extended from its face.

The cathedra started to glow as a beam struck the Drapion. A second later the Ogre shined a polished rich lilac.

“Gengar.” He called.

“Yes, my lord.”

“Send him to Celadon City and bring her back to me, alive and unharmed.”

“As you wish Yuugure-sama.”

*****​
I stood there between the trees; it was still early in the afternoon yet a murder of Murkrow surrounded me.

“Rem.” My trainer called. “Where are you?”

“I’m over here Kenichi.” I yelled. But he didn’t hear me, he couldn’t. Bastard can’t even here me telepathically.

“Ok, I’ll leave quietly. Just act like you didn’t even see me.” I told the Murkrows; even through telepathy I had a shaky voice.

They started to caw at me louder, and louder until finally, there leader came. A large black crow, with a long yellow beak that was wearing a hat landed on the branch in front of me. I knew that I wasn’t going to leave there alive, a least not without a fight.

I took a few steps back, when they charged at me from every direction, the Honchkrow in the lead. I let out a loud battle cry, and attacked there leader.

“Ice punch!” I might not have been an Ice Meijin but the Guild Master taught me the attack, something about black feathers, beaks and murders, ehh, wasn’t paying attention at the time

The Honchkrow took hefty damage, but that didn’t mean I didn’t. Luckily though, while I was attacking they were pushing me out of the forest. I still don’t understand how I got there in the first place.

“There you are Rem.” said Ken, approaching me as I finished of the last Murkrow.

“Take that ya lousy scum!” I shouted.

“Rem what are you doing we have to get to the Pokémon Centre, I told Shin to wait for us there.” He stood in front of me; his even gray hair covered his eyes.

I walked towards him without an answer, in the end he couldn’t hear me; he was deaf. But that wasn’t the issue here; I don’t even use my voice to talk. For some strange reason he couldn’t here me telepathically, despite being able to here other Pokémon’s telepathy just fine. Ironic huh.

We walked back to the Centre when we spotted a trainer and his Kirlia.

“Hi there.” he gestured.

Ken stopped and waved back. “Hello.” He said with a smile, which was fake. I knew that because after all I am the feeling Pokémon and no, it isn’t the same deal with the telepathy. Rarely, I could sense Ken’s emotions, and yet he never knew how to express them naturally.

“How ‘bout a battle.”? He asked.

I looked at him. He wore a black hat, a white t-shirt and black jeans. I looked at his eyes, they were white; a psychic Meijin. But it was obvious he wasn’t from the guild in Saffron, the emblem on his t-shirt showed a Solrock and a Lunatone, he was from Hoen.

It wasn’t a big deal for Ken to know what someone is saying, he could read lips. I just hated it when they would think of me as his hearing ear dog or something like that.

“Sorry, I can’t, we have an appointment,” Ken replied. “But if you want we can battle tomorrow. We’re heading to the Pokémon Centre now.”

“Ok, we’ll go with. My name’s Yuuki.”

“I’m Kenichi, and this is Rem.” he said pointing at me

“Are you hungry Kurly?” he asked the Kirlia.

“Hungry, Kurly-chan is starving.” she answered frolicly.

Kurly-chan, boy she must be seriously spoiled I thought, about to mention something to them.

“Hey there you two, just so you know, Ken there is deaf.” I told them through telepathy.

“Oh, so are you his—”

NO.” I snapped.

Both of them daunted. The Kirlia even fell on her back, while Ken kept walking.

“Ok, sorry, no harm done.” he said a little overwhelmed.

“Kurly-chan was overwhelmed!” She exclaimed, getting up.

Ken stopped so that we could catch up.

As we walked to the Pokémon Centre, I fell back, captivated by the color of the sky. The sun was just setting, clouds hovering over it. It was a gradient scarlet and indigo. While I stopped to admire the sight, they enter the Centre leaving me behind.

“Hey, wait for me!” I yelled, running towards them.

The door closed in my face, and because I was too small the sensor didn’t notice me, so the door wouldn’t open.

“Son of a Purugly.” I murmured.

When I turned around there was a Purugly at my face. I gasped and got out of the way as fast as I could, while the trainer and the Purugly entered the Centre.

“No, wait.”

I sighed, sitting at the door of the Pokémon Centre. Watching the now, oddly still scarlet sky, and the first star, then sighing again. I looked at the trees and saw Murkrows approaching, landing only a few meters away I flinched and tried to make my self invisible, when the door finally opened.

When I turned around it was the nurse. “Hey there little Ralts. Are you lost?”

“No, my trainer is inside.” I said hastily.

She let me in; I walked to the middle of the room and looked for Ken. When I saw him, he was sitting on a table next to who I thought was Yuuki, and a black Kirlia with green horns, who had its eyes closed and arms crossed.

“Hey Ken when were you planning to get me.” I said sarcastically knowing he wouldn’t answer.

“Rem where were you?” he asked.

“Hi there.” said Yuuki but with a higher pitch than normal.

“Oh Hi Yuu- wait a second your not Yuuki.”

I could tell not only by her voice, but her black, white pupiled eyes that she wasn’t Yuuki; a Dark Meijin. Not to mention the two green hair clips in her jet black hair that made her look like the Kirlia next to her.

“I’m Hikari. Yuuki’s sister,” She said with a smile. “And this here is Light.” pointing at the quiet Kirlia.

A sweat drop was on the back of my head. “Hikari and Light.” I quipped. “So, where are Yuuki and Kurly anyway?” I asked.

“Umm, well let me explain-”

Emergency broadcast.” The television aired, as the nurse increased the volume.

A group of wild Banette are on a rampage burning the plains of the National Park, two trainers- no this just in two Meijins, are trying to stop the ghosts but it seems they are finding it very difficult, water Pokémon trainers close by are encouraged to help put out these fires, as they are expanding.”

We took a closer look at the Meijins; they were Shinichi and Akane! We watched as Maggie, L and Grovyle attacked the Banette, and noticed something else.

“Did you see that Rem?” he asked coolly.

I nodded. Every time they would knock a Banette out it would disappear and two more would replace it. There numbers were multiplying and fast.

“Rem…” he got up. “Let’s hurry on down there.”

“I’ll come too.” said Hikari. “We can help out right Light.” She said boldly.

“Ok, but we have to hurry.” He clipped.

*****​

The train stopped at its destination in Goldenrod City. They came out of the Train three teenagers and their Pokémon, a boy with cobalt hair, his Grovyle beside him, a red haired girl with her Magby and Elekid, and a girl with white hair, accompanied by her Froslass.

Shinichi grunted. “I hate trains, they’re so tiring.”

“You were asleep the whole way!” Akane exclaimed.

“Really?” he said in ignorance.
Grovyle kept walking until he got to the lobby where the TV usually was and he was surprised by something, while the others took their time.

“I can’t what to see Rem, I’m going to burn him alive.” said Maggie.

“Umm, technically he’s not alive; he’s a ghost,” L explicated. “And besides you should be worrying more about your electric training.”

“Can’t you guys go one minute without arguing.” Froslass complain.

Maggie pointed at the L. “He started i-”

“Shin I think you should see this.” said Grovyle.

“What is it Grovyle,” he walked closer to him and noticed what the TV screen showed, a woman, green hair and emerald eyes standing behind a Torterra that was facing a knocked out Drapion. “Ka-chan.” he said calmly as a single tear drop went down his cheek.

“Hey, isn’t that Shin’s mom.”? Maggie asked.

“Yeah, the Celadon Guild Master, but wait I thought she had a terminal illness.” said L.

“Quiet you two,” Akane hushed. “Shin what happened?”

“I don’t know but I’m going back.” He turned and walked toward the train. “No, I can’t do that to Ken, I promised.” He murmured.

“What is it Shinichi?” she asked.

“Nothing lets go, I don’t want to be late on Ken.”

“Ok.”

“I bet he’s just afraid to get back on the train alone.” said Maggie.

They exited the train station, heading north to the National Park, after they left the city limits Akane let out her Arcanine, it shiny and not just yellow from the effects of electric training, and was stripped with a thunder like pattern.

“Hey Rexy.” she said petting him gently. “We can ride him, that way we’ll get to Ecruteak faster.” she suggested.

“Ok, but lets go through the National Park.” said Shinichi.

She got on Rexy first, while the Froslass helped Yuki up, then Shinichi. Grovyle had already gotten to the top of a tree and was gliding ahead of them.

When they reached the park Rexy stopped. “What’s wrong.” asked Akane.

The Arcanine Started to growl, as a flame sparked in the middle of the park. “Time for work.” sighed Maggie.

A Banette appeared over the flame with a wicked grin. “Looks like it.” said L.

“A fire Bannette, never seen any of those before.” said Shinichi.

“A job’s a job, lets go Maggie.” said Akane.

“No this ones mine, I want to practice my fire skills.” said L.

"Any problems Maggie?" asked Akane.

“Knock yourself out… not literally.” Maggie answered trying to point out that there was no pun intended.

A sweat drop went down L’s head staring at Maggie and it wasn’t from the heat, he then dashed towards the Banette shouting out a loud battle cry.

“HEAL!”

He attacked the Banette with a fire enforced grip, the ghost within his grasp he absorbed the fire energy from it until it stopped burning then jumped out of the way.

“There,” he let out a breath.

The Banette floated to the ground. “That was easy.” L turned his back and walked to Akane.

Rexy started to growl again, this time louder. “What is it this time,”? She looked at the place where the Banette was, this time two flames sparked. “What’s going on?”

Two Banettes appeared, and with the same wicked grin they began to throw flames at the trees and grass.

L looked behind him. “Crap, didn’t I just cure it. What happened?”

“L, you just can’t get the job done right can you?” said Maggie.

“Shut up, I did it just like I was taught.”

Maggie rolled her eyes. “Let me show you how it’s done the right way.”

She charged at the Banette. “No, Maggie wait.” Akane warned.

But it was too late; Maggie had already finished the attack on both Banettes, but what happened was just what Akane had feared. They both floated two the ground replaced by four more.

“Oh, dear!” Maggie exclaimed.

Akane bit her lip. “What do we do now?”

Shinichi walked up to her, “First we have to stop the fire, I have a theory on why this is happening, but stopping the fire is priority.”

She nodded. “L, Maggie,” she called. “I want you two to go look for water Pokémon trainers to help put out the fire until we figure this out.”

“Ok.”
“On it.”

"Froslass, you and Yuki should get out of here until this settles down."

"Ok." replied Froslass carrying Yuki away from the scene.

By then the flames had reached the sky, Shinichi was still pondering a solution, while Akane was despratly tring to look for a way to put out the fire.

Grovyle sighed impatiantly. “Shin this is useless.” he said, charging at the four ghosts.

“That idiot.” he mumbled.

As Grovyle attacked their numbers multiplied, and soon L and Maggie were attacking with him.

The stress had engulfed Shinichi and so did the heat, he was running out of time, yet the minutes felt like hours as he pondered, while the fires kept rising.

END OF CHAPTER 1

The chapter was cramping the thread so I put it between spoilers.
 
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Re: Adventures of My 'Deaf' Trainer

Its good, nothing to say here that I haven't told you at school.
Good description, introducing the characters is good and the dialogue is a huge improvement. But also you need to use less fancy words.
Honestly, "quipped", "clipped"? How about "said"? Writing talent isn't about having an awesome vocabulary, its about telling your story in way that makes it fun and exciting.
And no, the ability to use the synonym option on MS Word doesn't count.
But I'm not worried about you, you'll do fine. OR ELSE!

That is the absolute worst piece of advice that I have ever seen a reader give somebody. First of all, a good vocabulary helps, especially with the atmosphere. For example.

"This is ridiculous," he said.

Compared to

"This is ridiculous," he laughed.

One is ridiculously vague, and the other implies that it is a light hearted scenario.

Less fancy words? I understand the problems with flowery sentences, but a single word? Replacing "said" with better words like "quipped" conveys a lot more meaning in a short amount of words, giving more control over pacing.

In short, (@author) good attempt at the vocabulary thing. =P
 
I really don't care what other people think, but just so I'm not misunderstood. I haven't heard of you or seen you much around the shop, fo you have a fic? I'd like to read it myself. There's no need to be so hot-headed, if you want to tell me that my advice is wrong, you can do that in a manner that doesn't make me want to hate you. (I don't, btw)

I don't see that its the worst piece of advice. Here's the deal, when you use words that aren't commonly used in common language, it detracts from the story, you would pause and say "hey, what does that mean?" This jerks you out of the story. While using to many "Fancy words" would stick out like a sore thumb, "said" blends in allowing you to cotiue the dialogue in a way that keeps you immersed in the
story.

You think that, I don't want any other words used, that wrong. I use "Murmured" "Muttered" "Laugh" "Echoed" as much as the other guy. But in moderation. To many means adding unnessecary emotions to something of minimal importance, thus making it "Fancy".

Please, before you decide to make a fool of somebody over a single comment, make sure to know what they mean... A simple VM or something is fine but this lead to nothing and will probably amount to nothing.

Try read a few articles from "Bulbagarden Writing Academy" in the Writers workshop to know exactly what I mean.
 
As for the "fancy words" thing. I think there's definitely a time and place for the use of words beyond just "he/she said." It can help add more description without cluttering up the story.

Sometimes simply going with "said" instead of the more descriptive words to describe a quote is necessary however, but it all depends on the situation and the effect the author wants to have.

So yeah, I think you are both right in some sense.

As for the story itself, I am a fan of the premise for sure. This is a great idea. Your grammar, punctuation and level of description could be improved, but so could everyone on this site (most of which myself). Also, I'd suggest staying consistent in how you space paragraphs out. You can do whatever you feel is best for your story, but as a general rule of thumb I try to start a new "paragraph" whenever a new person talks. Having too much of a big block of letters that includes both quotes and general description can be a bit confusing at times.

Overall, I think this is a fantastic start to an intriging story. Keep it up!
 
As for the "fancy words" thing. I think there's definitely a time and place for the use of words beyond just "he/she said." It can help add more description without cluttering up the story.

Sometimes simply going with "said" instead of the more descriptive words to describe a quote is necessary however, but it all depends on the situation and the effect the author wants to have.

So yeah, I think you are both right in some sense.

As for the story itself, I am a fan of the premise for sure. This is a great idea. Your grammar, punctuation and level of description could be improved, but so could everyone on this site (most of which myself). Also, I'd suggest staying consistent in how you space paragraphs out. You can do whatever you feel is best for your story, but as a general rule of thumb I try to start a new "paragraph" whenever a new person talks. Having too much of a big block of letters that includes both quotes and general description can be a bit confusing at times.

Overall, I think this is a fantastic start to an intriging story. Keep it up!

I will Thx ^^
 
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