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The chapters are getting longer and you seem to be adding more description to it however you still lack a proper plot it just seems like you're going through anime scenarios at times.
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Why do you have to say it like that? Just don't come back. No need to be a jerk about it.
And you will keep hating this forum until you improve your writing. For now, I say leave for awhile, take some writing lessons to better your skills, take peoples advice even if they criticize you, and don't complain about it! Suck it up like a man.
Now, go!
Uh wow so much to be said. Apparently sugar-coating things for you to ingest only makes you fatter and more obstinate. So here's the deal plain and simple-like. You are not trying. It's obvious. I'm not sure why you're putting this story up here. There's no planning, no purpose, no meat, nothing. If you are trying you're just going to have to own up to the fact that you suck. But I don't believe that's true, really. I don't. You're obviously intelligent enough to put together coherent sentences so why can't you put together the criticisms given to you to actually improve?
Other writers aren't constantly being criticized because they listen to the criticisms first and fix things. When things improve, they don't need constant correction. Thats when recognition and praise is warrented. You've not warrented any recognition or praise that you think you're deserving of because there has been no improvement.
My advice? Go away. Just do it. I invite you to come back when you actually have a story planned out and aren't just floozying around with nonsense based on the anime.