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Here it is, my first fic on Bulbagarden! Before we begin, a few points I thought I should cover. This events of this fic are meant to occur in roughly the same time period as those of Pokemon X and Y. However, it is not simply my version of the game's events. The main protagonists will be original characters, and their story will collide with game events at some points, but the focus will remain on them. For that reason, some basic knowledge of the plot of X and Y may help in reading, but I am going to do my best to keep the story accessible to everyone.
I love reviews and criticism, and don't be afraid to be harsh if you feel the need. Seriously, I can take it. I'm always looking to improve my writing, but I'm gonna need help from you to find out what to work on, so feel free to leave any comments you may have.
With that said, just the fact that you're giving this a chance means a lot to me. I hope it entertains you at least a little bit!
Table of Contents:
Prologue - Charred (in this post)
Chapter 1 - Family Days
Chapter 2 (coming soon)
A flash of light and a thunderous crash shattered the tranquility of the forest, sending the native Pokemon scurrying, flying, fleeing far away from the disturbance. In the center of a charred, dead patch of earth, which was only moments ago a flowering meadow, there lay the mangled remains of a van. One of the back doors had been blown off, and a small Pokemon floated slowly out of the wreckage, a Floette. She moved erratically, with her face contorted into a pained grimace. Unlike most Floette, the white on her body was offset by a dark blue color, rather than the healthy green which most of her species displayed.
“H-hey! Stop!”
The Floette looked over her shoulder at a man near the driver’s seat, unsteadily climbing to his feet. His hair and the suit he wore were both the same color, a fiery orange. Or had been, as the side of the suit was now stained by a steadily growing patch of red. A broken pair of orange sunglasses dangled from his face, useless to cover the desperation in his eyes. Seeing the Floette’s hesitation, he called out again.
“Please! Just wait! I didn’t- nngh!”
The man fell against the side of the van for support, and the Floette turned away. Tightening her grip on the red and black flower she always carried, she began to drift wearily into the surrounding trees. The man watched her as long as he could, until she disappeared into the forest.
Lysandre stood at the side of the crater, scanning the destruction. His scientists skittered across the burnt earth like ants, taking samples and making measurements. They kicked up pure white ashes as they worked, which floated upwards, giving an unearthly picture of snow falling in reverse. Whenever these ashes encroached upon Lysandre’s dark suit, he quickly brushed them off, watching them drift away from him.
Beside him stood the Team Flare member who had been driving the van, who now had one arm in a sling and bandages wrapped around his chest. The man, who had been fiddling with a loose strand of cloth, snapped to attention as Lysandre turned to face him.
“So… Louis, was it?”
“Uh, y-yes, sir! That’s it.”
“So, Louis, you found the Floette, lured her back to the van, attempted the capture, and when you were about to leave,” Lysandre gestured to the scene with a large sweep of his arm,” this happened.”
“Yes, sir!”
“You’re sure it was the Floette? There wasn’t anything else that could have caused it? Another Pokemon, perhaps?”
“No, sir! Nothing larger than a Fletchinder around, nothing that would have been able to stop me! Well, besides her. Apparently. I’m sorry, sir, I had no idea this would happen! I take full responsibility, but get me back on her track, and I promise I’ll bring her back next time!”
Lysandre considered the pleading man for a minute. Then, with a broad smile cracking his face, he reached out a hand and placed it on Louis’ shoulder. Louis visibly exhaled.
“Louis, let me tell you right now that you have nothing to be sorry for. I should have considered how much power the Eternal Floette could hold. This is my own failure, and no one else’s.” His eyes grew cloudy. “Just another instance of humanity’s shortcomings harming our world. I am very sorry that you had to be the one to make this discovery, and in such a violent fashion, but you have nothing to be ashamed of.”
Louis smiled ruefully and glanced at his injured arm. His eyes snapped back to his superior, who was continuing to speak.
“However, I am afraid I will not be assigning you to the Floette’s capture again. You yourself are to be put on leave from operations so you may heal. Afterwards, you will join the others in preparation of the Weapon. I will be continuing pursuit of the Floette myself.”
The man was about to protest, but before he could, he was interrupted by shrill laughter.
“Hee hee hee! Lysandre, does that mean what I think it means?”
Team Flare’s boss turned and found himself face to face with the one man who could match him in intelligence, his senior scientist, Xerosic. Xerosic was brilliant, true, but Lysandre couldn’t help but feel that he had no vision. He was only ever excited about the opportunity for performing his own research. “Likely. I find that when you think something, Xerosic, it is usually correct.”
The scientist raised a blue-gloved hand and shaded his eyes against the sun. His orange suit contrast starkly with his skin, which was deathly pale. He spoke quickly, barely dropping one word from his mouth before he began another. “Ah, I’ll finally be able to work on that precious Weapon of yours! This is glorious, simply glorious! But, if I may ask, why do you intend to pursue the Floette on your own? I’m sure my researchers can develop something capable of containing-“
“No.” Lysandre beckoned and began walking towards the center of the crater. “Follow me, and allow me to explain.” He glanced over his shoulder at Louis. “You come as well, Louis.”
The three weaved their way among the scientists scribbling notes and staring at small screens which incessantly flashed numbers and values. Eventually, Lysandre stopped at the back of the van, in the center of the destruction. He peered inside, inspecting the torn remnants of a cage. It had been blown open into the shape of a flower, with the metal bars bent away from the inside. Some had completely detached and punctured the sides of the van. “Louis, you said that when the Floette escaped, she looked weak, correct? As if she was in pain?”
“Yes, sir!”
Lysandre ran a hand over the broken, useless hinges where a door used to be. “I think that whatever she did, it does not come without great cost. To herself, and her surroundings. The expense of so much power at once damages her own vitality in addition to the world around her. For that reason, I will be pursuing her alone, and attempting to gain her trust rather than simply capture her.”
Lysandre bent down and picked up a gray object from the ground. It was a small wildflower, or had been one, before the explosion left it burnt and shriveled.
“This flower used to be beautiful. Colorful, and full of life. Now you simply have to look to see what has happened. Its beauty is gone. There is nothing left for it but a burial.” As if to illustrate his point, he snapped the twig in half and let it fall to the earth, where he ground it down with the toe of his boot. “With the Floette we can easily track down AZ, true. We will never operate the Weapon without his key. But another capture attempt would simply destroy more of the beauty that I am trying to save, and risk harming her as well. Our only option is to convince her, and that, I think, will be best attempted alone.”
Louis bent down and peered at the ground. “Yeah, I get it now. Don’t want this whole thing to happen again.” He ran his good hand through the dirt. “Although, even with the flowers gone, it’s still kind of pretty, isn’t it? When you take a close look, there’s a lot of color in the ground here.”
Xerosic bent down beside him. “Oooh, look! See that sparkle? That’s mica, but I’ve never seen that color before. How did it get out here? The soil composition is quite interesting.” He reached a hand into his pocket and pulled out some small vials, which he proceeded to fill with pieces of sediment.
Lysandre sighed and looked down at the two men digging in the dirt. It was a shame, he thought, that so many people look at the world with nothing but their eyes. “It has no vibrancy, no purpose. The rocks are there, but what do they do? The plants had life. They had a role to play. The soil provided them with security, a place to lay their roots. Now the plants are gone, and the rocks are simply rocks. Although we could not help here, it is our duty to make sure Kalos remains beautiful forever, and never loses its purpose.”
Lysandre turned away and began to walk towards the surrounding forest. He called back over his shoulder to Xerosic. “When your scientists are done, Xerosic, we will leave. There is nothing but failure here for us.”
“Yes, of course, sir. Oh, is that a fossil? Hee hee!”
“Give it here, doc, I want to see!”
“Don’t call me that. I’m a man of science! And I will be known as such.”
The voices faded into the background before disappearing altogether as Lysandre was swallowed up by the forest. It was known as the Winding Woods for a reason. Getting lost on the labyrinthine trails was easy in there, and at the moment, Lysandre thought it would be something of a blessing.
As he wandered, Lysandre began to think. A legend he had heard once stated that there was a village deep in this forest where Pokemon who had been harmed by humans could seek refuge. He thought that if such a place existed, it must be quite large. Massive, even. Visiting would be quite the experience; perhaps it warranted a search sometime soon. He had already seen evidence of one legend that very day. Considering the possibility of another was not difficult at all.
He stopped and sat down against a tree, leaning his head back against the bark. His hair, pressed against the tree, pushed upwards like flames creeping their way upwards into the canopy. As Lysandre closed his eyes, the sounds of Pokemon cries and the scents of the forest enveloped him, lulling him into a deep reverie.
He couldn’t help but feel that this search for the Floette would be quite interesting. Plus, it would keep him occupied away from towns and cities. Returning to Lysandre Labs and the public eye drained him more and more each time, and frankly paled in comparison to the glory of his mission. Team Flare could provide some sanctuary from society, true, but it had to be kept secret. The search for Floette could easily be passed off as a vacation, or health trip. In the end, he figured, that may very well be what it is. After all, a man can only suffer a world of fools for so long before he begins to feel he is going insane.
I love reviews and criticism, and don't be afraid to be harsh if you feel the need. Seriously, I can take it. I'm always looking to improve my writing, but I'm gonna need help from you to find out what to work on, so feel free to leave any comments you may have.
With that said, just the fact that you're giving this a chance means a lot to me. I hope it entertains you at least a little bit!
Table of Contents:
Prologue - Charred (in this post)
Chapter 1 - Family Days
Chapter 2 (coming soon)
Prologue - Charred
A flash of light and a thunderous crash shattered the tranquility of the forest, sending the native Pokemon scurrying, flying, fleeing far away from the disturbance. In the center of a charred, dead patch of earth, which was only moments ago a flowering meadow, there lay the mangled remains of a van. One of the back doors had been blown off, and a small Pokemon floated slowly out of the wreckage, a Floette. She moved erratically, with her face contorted into a pained grimace. Unlike most Floette, the white on her body was offset by a dark blue color, rather than the healthy green which most of her species displayed.
“H-hey! Stop!”
The Floette looked over her shoulder at a man near the driver’s seat, unsteadily climbing to his feet. His hair and the suit he wore were both the same color, a fiery orange. Or had been, as the side of the suit was now stained by a steadily growing patch of red. A broken pair of orange sunglasses dangled from his face, useless to cover the desperation in his eyes. Seeing the Floette’s hesitation, he called out again.
“Please! Just wait! I didn’t- nngh!”
The man fell against the side of the van for support, and the Floette turned away. Tightening her grip on the red and black flower she always carried, she began to drift wearily into the surrounding trees. The man watched her as long as he could, until she disappeared into the forest.
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Lysandre stood at the side of the crater, scanning the destruction. His scientists skittered across the burnt earth like ants, taking samples and making measurements. They kicked up pure white ashes as they worked, which floated upwards, giving an unearthly picture of snow falling in reverse. Whenever these ashes encroached upon Lysandre’s dark suit, he quickly brushed them off, watching them drift away from him.
Beside him stood the Team Flare member who had been driving the van, who now had one arm in a sling and bandages wrapped around his chest. The man, who had been fiddling with a loose strand of cloth, snapped to attention as Lysandre turned to face him.
“So… Louis, was it?”
“Uh, y-yes, sir! That’s it.”
“So, Louis, you found the Floette, lured her back to the van, attempted the capture, and when you were about to leave,” Lysandre gestured to the scene with a large sweep of his arm,” this happened.”
“Yes, sir!”
“You’re sure it was the Floette? There wasn’t anything else that could have caused it? Another Pokemon, perhaps?”
“No, sir! Nothing larger than a Fletchinder around, nothing that would have been able to stop me! Well, besides her. Apparently. I’m sorry, sir, I had no idea this would happen! I take full responsibility, but get me back on her track, and I promise I’ll bring her back next time!”
Lysandre considered the pleading man for a minute. Then, with a broad smile cracking his face, he reached out a hand and placed it on Louis’ shoulder. Louis visibly exhaled.
“Louis, let me tell you right now that you have nothing to be sorry for. I should have considered how much power the Eternal Floette could hold. This is my own failure, and no one else’s.” His eyes grew cloudy. “Just another instance of humanity’s shortcomings harming our world. I am very sorry that you had to be the one to make this discovery, and in such a violent fashion, but you have nothing to be ashamed of.”
Louis smiled ruefully and glanced at his injured arm. His eyes snapped back to his superior, who was continuing to speak.
“However, I am afraid I will not be assigning you to the Floette’s capture again. You yourself are to be put on leave from operations so you may heal. Afterwards, you will join the others in preparation of the Weapon. I will be continuing pursuit of the Floette myself.”
The man was about to protest, but before he could, he was interrupted by shrill laughter.
“Hee hee hee! Lysandre, does that mean what I think it means?”
Team Flare’s boss turned and found himself face to face with the one man who could match him in intelligence, his senior scientist, Xerosic. Xerosic was brilliant, true, but Lysandre couldn’t help but feel that he had no vision. He was only ever excited about the opportunity for performing his own research. “Likely. I find that when you think something, Xerosic, it is usually correct.”
The scientist raised a blue-gloved hand and shaded his eyes against the sun. His orange suit contrast starkly with his skin, which was deathly pale. He spoke quickly, barely dropping one word from his mouth before he began another. “Ah, I’ll finally be able to work on that precious Weapon of yours! This is glorious, simply glorious! But, if I may ask, why do you intend to pursue the Floette on your own? I’m sure my researchers can develop something capable of containing-“
“No.” Lysandre beckoned and began walking towards the center of the crater. “Follow me, and allow me to explain.” He glanced over his shoulder at Louis. “You come as well, Louis.”
The three weaved their way among the scientists scribbling notes and staring at small screens which incessantly flashed numbers and values. Eventually, Lysandre stopped at the back of the van, in the center of the destruction. He peered inside, inspecting the torn remnants of a cage. It had been blown open into the shape of a flower, with the metal bars bent away from the inside. Some had completely detached and punctured the sides of the van. “Louis, you said that when the Floette escaped, she looked weak, correct? As if she was in pain?”
“Yes, sir!”
Lysandre ran a hand over the broken, useless hinges where a door used to be. “I think that whatever she did, it does not come without great cost. To herself, and her surroundings. The expense of so much power at once damages her own vitality in addition to the world around her. For that reason, I will be pursuing her alone, and attempting to gain her trust rather than simply capture her.”
Lysandre bent down and picked up a gray object from the ground. It was a small wildflower, or had been one, before the explosion left it burnt and shriveled.
“This flower used to be beautiful. Colorful, and full of life. Now you simply have to look to see what has happened. Its beauty is gone. There is nothing left for it but a burial.” As if to illustrate his point, he snapped the twig in half and let it fall to the earth, where he ground it down with the toe of his boot. “With the Floette we can easily track down AZ, true. We will never operate the Weapon without his key. But another capture attempt would simply destroy more of the beauty that I am trying to save, and risk harming her as well. Our only option is to convince her, and that, I think, will be best attempted alone.”
Louis bent down and peered at the ground. “Yeah, I get it now. Don’t want this whole thing to happen again.” He ran his good hand through the dirt. “Although, even with the flowers gone, it’s still kind of pretty, isn’t it? When you take a close look, there’s a lot of color in the ground here.”
Xerosic bent down beside him. “Oooh, look! See that sparkle? That’s mica, but I’ve never seen that color before. How did it get out here? The soil composition is quite interesting.” He reached a hand into his pocket and pulled out some small vials, which he proceeded to fill with pieces of sediment.
Lysandre sighed and looked down at the two men digging in the dirt. It was a shame, he thought, that so many people look at the world with nothing but their eyes. “It has no vibrancy, no purpose. The rocks are there, but what do they do? The plants had life. They had a role to play. The soil provided them with security, a place to lay their roots. Now the plants are gone, and the rocks are simply rocks. Although we could not help here, it is our duty to make sure Kalos remains beautiful forever, and never loses its purpose.”
Lysandre turned away and began to walk towards the surrounding forest. He called back over his shoulder to Xerosic. “When your scientists are done, Xerosic, we will leave. There is nothing but failure here for us.”
“Yes, of course, sir. Oh, is that a fossil? Hee hee!”
“Give it here, doc, I want to see!”
“Don’t call me that. I’m a man of science! And I will be known as such.”
The voices faded into the background before disappearing altogether as Lysandre was swallowed up by the forest. It was known as the Winding Woods for a reason. Getting lost on the labyrinthine trails was easy in there, and at the moment, Lysandre thought it would be something of a blessing.
As he wandered, Lysandre began to think. A legend he had heard once stated that there was a village deep in this forest where Pokemon who had been harmed by humans could seek refuge. He thought that if such a place existed, it must be quite large. Massive, even. Visiting would be quite the experience; perhaps it warranted a search sometime soon. He had already seen evidence of one legend that very day. Considering the possibility of another was not difficult at all.
He stopped and sat down against a tree, leaning his head back against the bark. His hair, pressed against the tree, pushed upwards like flames creeping their way upwards into the canopy. As Lysandre closed his eyes, the sounds of Pokemon cries and the scents of the forest enveloped him, lulling him into a deep reverie.
He couldn’t help but feel that this search for the Floette would be quite interesting. Plus, it would keep him occupied away from towns and cities. Returning to Lysandre Labs and the public eye drained him more and more each time, and frankly paled in comparison to the glory of his mission. Team Flare could provide some sanctuary from society, true, but it had to be kept secret. The search for Floette could easily be passed off as a vacation, or health trip. In the end, he figured, that may very well be what it is. After all, a man can only suffer a world of fools for so long before he begins to feel he is going insane.
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