Beta reading?

[mastermind lissi]

Hi, not sure if this is allowed here but I need someone to beta read a short one shot I wrote. I posted it last night, but I didn’t like how it sounded. I’ll make some edits, but I’d like someone to read it over too. I think I find myself making slight thematic errors, like introducing something in the beginning and forgetting about it near the end.

It’s my Yancy and Curtis non-ship fluff one shot that’s on my “Lissi likes to write” thread. If someone could leave some tips or edits in a pm (without being tooo harsh), that would be very much appreciated!

Oh and if this isn’t allowed you can delete it

 

[Catz]

I'd be happy to! I'm actually looking for beta readers myself