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@Ambyssin Thanks very much for your review! Glad you enjoyed Max redeeming himself somewhat and also the fast paced training followed by the encounter with Curtains. The latter was something I was a bit conscious might not come off right since I know it is a bit unusual - I felt like it served the story much better, however!
As for most of the rest of your post, you're quite right to say time will tell Thanks for the insights though - it's really great to know what readers are thinking!
@unrepentantAuthor I see you have similar comments to Ambyssin regarding Max & Frankie's makeup so I'll bear that in mind. For a lot of the things you've said I'll also say "time will tell", however I will say that you should rest assured the things you're worried about won't happen.
Thanks also for the point on clothes - I'll keep that in mind for future chapters.
As for most of the rest of your post, you're quite right to say time will tell Thanks for the insights though - it's really great to know what readers are thinking!
@unrepentantAuthor I see you have similar comments to Ambyssin regarding Max & Frankie's makeup so I'll bear that in mind. For a lot of the things you've said I'll also say "time will tell", however I will say that you should rest assured the things you're worried about won't happen.
Thanks also for the point on clothes - I'll keep that in mind for future chapters.