Maybe Wednesday
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This is a pretty safe fanfic, but there may be a bit of violence later on, and some characters may well become more than friends, and some mild language, so I rated it PG-13 just to be safe. This is mostly Original, with cameos from canon characters later on. I welcome constructive criticism, comments and questions, whether they are posted here, PMed, or left on my user profile. Without further ado, here we go!
Well guys, I decided to go back to this and rewrite it, then actually finish it! So here's the prologue. This wasn't in the original, but rest assured, it's the same story.
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Prologue
This is truly a place of beauty.
As I stand upon the brow of this lush, green hill, I can but marvel at the magnificence of the scene before me.
As far as the eye can see, it is a riot of colour. Green grass forms a verdant carpet, rolling gently like the sea on a calm day. Flowers grow in abundance, blooming innocently with all the colours of the rainbow; ocean blue, fiery orange, sunny yellow, pearly white, beauteous shades of pink and purple, along with every other colour you could possibly name and some you couldn’t.
But it is empty. There is nobody here but me. Me, the grass, the flowers and the sun. A light breeze races across the expanse before me, rippling the grass and causing the flowers to bend their heads in acknowledgement of its strength.
Yet still, I am alone. No Pidgey fly in the sky; no Rattata creep among the flowerbeds. Nothing walks these fields, man or Pokémon.
It should not be this way. This paradise, clean, pure and unspoilt, should be filled with life. It should be free for all to come and marvel at its beauty, and to be happy. The very air in this place makes you pleasantly dizzy and light-headed.
I breathe in slowly, savouring the taste of the air. It is pure, with just the slightest touch of sweetness, the kind that makes you want to close your eyes and stay here forever, just breathing.
But I should not be the only one enjoying this utopia. It should be filled with others, happy and carefree, just as I was. I cannot be happy until I share this beautiful place with the rest of the world!
Regretfully, I turn my back on Paradise, resolving that I will bring this place to the world, and the world to this place.
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Yes, it's short. The actual chapters will be longer. R&R, please!
Well guys, I decided to go back to this and rewrite it, then actually finish it! So here's the prologue. This wasn't in the original, but rest assured, it's the same story.
~~~~~
Prologue
This is truly a place of beauty.
As I stand upon the brow of this lush, green hill, I can but marvel at the magnificence of the scene before me.
As far as the eye can see, it is a riot of colour. Green grass forms a verdant carpet, rolling gently like the sea on a calm day. Flowers grow in abundance, blooming innocently with all the colours of the rainbow; ocean blue, fiery orange, sunny yellow, pearly white, beauteous shades of pink and purple, along with every other colour you could possibly name and some you couldn’t.
But it is empty. There is nobody here but me. Me, the grass, the flowers and the sun. A light breeze races across the expanse before me, rippling the grass and causing the flowers to bend their heads in acknowledgement of its strength.
Yet still, I am alone. No Pidgey fly in the sky; no Rattata creep among the flowerbeds. Nothing walks these fields, man or Pokémon.
It should not be this way. This paradise, clean, pure and unspoilt, should be filled with life. It should be free for all to come and marvel at its beauty, and to be happy. The very air in this place makes you pleasantly dizzy and light-headed.
I breathe in slowly, savouring the taste of the air. It is pure, with just the slightest touch of sweetness, the kind that makes you want to close your eyes and stay here forever, just breathing.
But I should not be the only one enjoying this utopia. It should be filled with others, happy and carefree, just as I was. I cannot be happy until I share this beautiful place with the rest of the world!
Regretfully, I turn my back on Paradise, resolving that I will bring this place to the world, and the world to this place.
~~~~~
Yes, it's short. The actual chapters will be longer. R&R, please!