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HELP: Future series starting to take shape, need feedback/suggestions

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As you've been probably keeping up with me around here, I've been mapping out a prototype idea that will become my next project after Chaos Rising. Mostly in the form of TV Trope-style bios but I've also spent some time rehearsing and brainstorming various scenarios either mentally or verbally (a common habit of mine, to the confusion of everyone around me who happens to see it). Given the fact that this idea hasn't gotten overly complex, which is what killed my previous prototype idea, it's starting to take shape. Therefore, I would like some feedback on it and any possible suggestions on the direction that this idea should take.

The basic premise is this: Nova Blitz, a rather ordinary 21-year old gets chosen by a Demon King to become his newest "champion" in order to destroy the Undead King and his Undead Army on the world known as Edyn. However, there is one teeny-tiny, terrible problem: Nova has plasmophobia, or fear of ghosts and undead, which means he's forced to fight a war against the very thing he's terrified of. He is also generally weak-willed, timid, and a cowardly lion, making him unfit to fight against such a powerful and ancient foe. He is given an artifact called the Demon King Ring (name may change), a golden ring that has several adjustable levels and that he can't take off that'll grant him the ability to use powerful magic in order to compensate for his lack of any natural magic in this realm of sorcery and monsters. Nova has no choice but to do his forcefully assigned task otherwise he can't go home. Along the way he makes friends in the form of Nina Firewing, the renegade princess of Phoenixwing Kingdom and a member of the Phoenix Clan with a rare gift, Sir Reginald Ganner, a high-ranking knight of the Galvatar Kingdom, Kettu Softfoot, a Werefox thief with a vendetta against the Undead Army, Van Junko, the noble and honorable Centaur warrior, Zeeker Cackle, the hyena Beastman with an unknown history, and Angelo Bubblehop, Prince of Aquatica and a member of the Hopper Clan. He also makes some enemies outside of the Undead Army such as Dominic Flight, a showboating wannabe warrior who will stop at nothing to get his way and bed as many women as possible, including Nina, the Phoenixwing Royal Family who seek to drag Nina back to their kingdom to satisfy their selfish and greedy desires, and others. Will Nova and his misfit group be able to end the 3,000 year stalemate war between Edyn and the Undead King?

That's the general layout so far. There are also two themes that act as something of a backbone for the series: Courage and Karma (more the former than the latter but it still plays a prominent role regardless). There are other lesser themes such as fighting fate, worthiness of one's love, the price of greed, revenge, atoning for past failures, war and letting go of the past. Also, unlike Chaos Rising, this series will have more lighthearted moments, such as more prominent running gags, slapstick, and other forms of comedy. It will, however, also have a higher maturity rating due to things like nudity, sex, lust, and death being more commonplace even compared to Chaos Rising already having the "M" rating.

Now, I need some feedback and suggestions on this idea. Does this idea sound promising? In terms of suggestions, I'm looking for are things like a series name (its current placeholder name is "Darkness Dawns" but that's a bit too generic at best, especially since I want it to match the theme(s) of the series), possible character ideas that can act as either friends or foes, potential enemies (both regular monsters and more prominent foes), spell names and effects (I already have the 9 elements laid out, which is mostly a cut-and-paste from Chaos Rising: Fire, Wind, Water, Earth, Lightning, Ice, Wood, Light, and Dark), ideas for familiars, and any other ideas you think would work here. Please leave any thoughts, suggestions, recommendations, and feedback for me, as it'll help this idea take root and become a future project. Thank you for your time and happy posting.
 
Update time.

Today I thought up of some lore to this new idea. Basically a bit of background info regarding how the whole ordeal began. Here's what I've cooked up so far.

Edyn is a world parallel to Earth. It formed, grew, and developed at the same pace as Earth did. However, it is a world with more magic than technology, thereby making it more of a foil to Earth. The magic in the planet's core caused certain creatures to evolve different, creating various monsters in the process. However, the different races on Edyn adapted to this evolution, gaining new properties in the process. Despite the monsters Edyn was a peaceful world. However, that would soon change.

In the Netherworld, a dark, hidden realm that connects to all worlds, a fierce power struggle was taking place. The Demon King and his army were facing off against the Undead King and his army. Both were fighting for supremacy, although the Demon King fought to maintain peace and order in the Netherworld, while the Undead King fought to conquer and rule with an iron fist. However, the Demon King's army had notable advantages that allowed them to push the Undead King and his Undead Army into a corner. Left without any hopes of surviving the oncoming demonic army the Undead King managed to open a gateway to another realm and fled, ending up in the world of Edyn.

Finding a world where he, at first, thought his mortal enemies couldn't follow, the Undead King quickly established a new Undead Army, complete with Captains and Generals, in order to turn Edyn into his own domain. This sudden invasion cause the synchronization between Earth and Edyn to shatter, with the time flow on Edyn becoming far more rapid to the point that months could pass on Edyn while only minutes would pass on Earth. The people of Edyn rallied together to defend their world from the Undead King but were fighting a losing battle, especially since the Undead King's presence had caused the local monsters to become more powerful and more vicious, along with introducing the concept of Undead-type monsters to Edyn. Losing ground rapidly, Edyn prayed to their Goddess who resides in the planet's core for help. In response, she opened a gateway to the Netherworld to allow the Demon King and his army to enter Edyn and aid them in their time of crisis. With the help of the Demon King and his army the people of Edyn were able to reclaim their world from the Undead King. However, the Undead King survived the final battle, having fled to a remote location in order to recover. The Demon King settled on Edyn to keep an eye on the Undead King until he made his next move, joining the Goddess in the planet's core, which also allowed him to rest after many centuries of long battles.

Every now and then surges of Undead Army remnants would emerge in an attempt to revive the Undead King and allow him another chance to conquer and rule. In response, the Demon King would summon a "noble soul" from another world to act as his champion and guide the people of Edyn to victory, equipping said noble soul with his prized weapon: the Demon King Ring. This continued for 3,000 years in Edyn time, although every champion failed to find and outright destroy the Undead King, especially since the Undead King was a coward and would often use decoys of himself to distract his foes while he remained hidden, but the champions were successful enough that it forced the Undead Army back into hibernation multiple times. The Demon King and Goddess tried many times to figure out a way to lure the Undead King out of hiding so he could be finished off for good. It was the Demon King who came up with a wild gambit that could potentially lure the Undead King into a false sense of security and expose him, allowing the next champion to finish the job for good. Which leads us to the current start of the series.

What do you think? Does this sound like a good bit of lore to the prototype idea? Let me know what you think.
 
Time for another update.

As you've probably heard me say in some other threads I've managed to come up with a Monster List and a (potentially complete) Familiar List. I figured I might as well share them with you so you can get an idea of how these concepts work. First, the Monster List.

Edyn Monster List

#NameTypeStrengthElementWeaknessValuable Parts
01GummiSlimeLowNullFireNone
02Mage GummiSlimeLowFireWaterNone
03Count GummiSlimeModerateWaterLightning, WoodNone
04Titan GummiSlimeModerateNullNoneNone
05King GummiSlimeHighNullNoneNone
06Giant GummiSlimeVery HighNullNoneNone
07Nut KnightPlantLowWoodFireSword, Shield, Cap
08Nut BowmanPlantLowWoodFireBow, Arrows, Cap
09Nut CasterPlantLowWoodFireStaff, Cap
10PlatyBeastLowWaterLightningTail
11Red PlatyBeastLowWaterLightningTail
12Ice PlatyBeastModerateIceFireTail
13King PlatyBeastModerateWaterLightningTail
14Wing SeedPlantLowWoodFireWings
15Bat SeedPlantLowWoodFireWings
16Hawk SeedPlantModerateWoodFireWings
17Condor SeedPlantModerateWoodFireWings
18Snap RatBeastLowNullNoneTail
19Fang RatBeastLowNullNoneTail
20Zombie RatUndeadLowDarkLightNone
21Fire RatBeastModerateFireWaterTail
22VoltSpiritLowLightningWood, EarthHorns
23ZapSpiritLowLightningWood, EarthHorns
24Blade HornetInsectLowWoodFire, WindStinger, Wings
25Sword HornetInsectModerateWoodFire, WindStinger, Wings
26Knife HornetInsectLowWoodFire, WindStinger, Wings
27Pixie MothInsectLowWoodFire, WindWings
28Flutter MothInsectLowWoodFire, WindWings
29Night MothInsectModerateDarkLight, WindWings
30Lunar MothInsectModerateLightDark, WindWings
31Devil KidLesser DevilLowDarkLightSpear, Wings
32Spear CretinLesser DevilModerateDarkLightSpear, Wings
33Ice DevilLesser DevilModerateIceFireSpear, Wings
34Vicious DevilLesser DevilHighDarkLightSpear, Wings
35Toxic FlyInsectLowWoodFireWings
36Spark FlyInsectLowLightningWood, EarthWings
37Gold FlyInsectVery HighLightDarkWings
38Chlorine King FlyInsectVery HighDarkLightWings, Claws
39Komodo ArcherReptileModerateEarthIceBow, Arrows, Tail
40Dragoon ArcherReptileModerateEarthIceBow, Arrows, Tail
41Rex ArcherReptileHighEarthIceBow, Arrows, Tail
42OrcBeastModerateNullNoneHammer, Shield
43CorpseUndeadLowDarkLightNone
44ZombieUndeadLowDarkLightNone
45CrawlerUndeadModerateDarkLightNone
46Zombie MasterUndeadModerateDarkLightNone
47SkeletonUndeadHighDarkLightNone
48Knife ScorpionInsectModerateEarthIcePincers, Stinger
49Saw ScorpionInsectModerateEarthIcePincers, Saw Tail
50Death ScorpionInsectHighDarkLightPincers, Stinger
51Red SkullUndeadLowFireWaterNone
52Blue SkullUndeadLowIceFireNone
53Black SkullUndeadModerateDarkLightNone
54Gold SkullUndeadModerateLightDarkNone
55Drill MoleBeastLowEarthWind, IceClaws
56Slash MoleBeastModerateEarthWind, IceClaws
57Digger MoleBeastModerateEarthWind, IceClaws
58King MoleBeastHighEarthWind, IceClaws
59Spine PorcupineBeastLowEarthIce, WindQuills, Claws
60Prickly PorcupineBeastModerateEarthIce, WindQuills, Claws
61Sharp PorcupineBeastModerateEarthIce, WindQuills, Claws
62King PorcupineBeastHighEarthIce, WindQuills, Claws
63HarpyAvianLowWindLightningTalons
64Gust HarpyAvianLowWindLightningTalons
65Cure HarpyAvianModerateWindLightningTalons
66Owl HarpyAvianModerateWindLightningTalons
67Night BatBeastLowWindLightningWings
68Echo BatBeastLowWindLightningWings
69Blood BatBeastModerateWindLightningWings
70Doom BatBeastModerateWindLightningWings
71Pus PoolSlimeLowEarthIceNone
72Lava PoolSlimeModerateFireWaterNone
73Toxic PoolSlimeModerateEarthIceNone
74RoachInsectLowNullNoneWings
75Big RoachInsectModerateNullNoneWings
76Giant RoachInsectHighNullNoneWings
77ThrasherBeastModerateWindLightning, IceHorn
78FroggyAquaticLowWaterLightning, WoodTongue
79CroakerAquaticLowWaterLightning, WoodTongue
80ToadyAquaticModerateWaterLightning, WoodTongue
81Dart FroggerAquaticModerateWaterLightning, WoodTongue
82JellyAquaticModerateWaterLightning, WoodCrystals
83Fire JellyAquaticModerateFireWaterCrystals
84Clay JellyAquaticHighEarthWood, IceCrystals
85King JellyAquaticVery HighWaterLightning, WoodCrystals
86Blue ClamAquaticLowWaterLightning, WoodPearls, Shell
87Red ClamAquaticLowWaterLighting, WoodPearls, Shell
88Black ClamAquaticModerateWaterLightning, WoodPearls, Shell
89Gold ClamAquaticHighLightDarkPearls, Shell
90Red SalamanderReptileModerateFireWaterTail
91Blue SalamanderReptileModerateWaterLightningTail
92Green SalamanderReptileModerateWoodFireTail
93Gold SalamanderReptileModerateLightDarkTail
94PufferAquaticLowWaterLightning, WoodNeedles
95Big PufferAquaticModerateWaterLightning, WoodNeedles
96Giant PufferAquaticHighWaterLightning, WoodNeedles
97Elec OgreLesser DevilModerateLightningEarth, WoodHorns
98Zap OgreLesser DevilModerateLightningEarth, WoodHorns
99Bolt OgreLesser DevilHighLightningEarth, WoodHorns
100ChimeraBeastModerateEarthWindHorns, Tail, Fangs, Wings
101Hyper ChimeraBeastHighEarthWindHorns, Tail, Fangs, Wings
102Frigid ChimeraBeastHighIceFireHorns, Tail, Fangs, Wings
103Death ChimeraBeastVery HighDarkLightHorns, Tail, Fangs, Wings
104NightmareLesser DevilModerateDarkLightSword
105DarkmareLesser DevilHighDarkLightSword
106DeathmareLesser DevilHighDarkLightSword
107GhostUndeadLowDarkLightNone
108LichUndeadModerateDarkLightNone
109SpecterUndeadModerateDarkLightNone
110PhantomUndeadHighDarkLightNone
111BamboozlePlantModerateWoodFireBamboo
112Red BamboozlePlantModerateWoodFireBamboo
113Blue BamboozlePlantHighWoodFireBamboo
114Death BamboozlePlantHighDarkLightBamboo
115Fire CobraReptileModerateFireWaterFangs, Tail
116Torrent CobraReptileModerateWaterLightning, WoodFangs, Tail
117Jungle CobraReptileModerateWoodFireFangs, Tail
118Gaki GhoulLesser DevilModerateWaterLightning, WoodHorns, Tail
119Aye-EyeLesser DevilModerateIceFireTentacles
120HeadhunterLesser DevilHighDarkLightScythe
121Bomb CactiPlantModerateWoodIceNeedles
122Blast CactiPlantModerateWoodIceNeedles
123Boom CactiPlantHighWoodIceNeedles
124Egg GangSpiritModerateEarthIce, WindSwords, Spears, Staves
125Golden Egg GangSpiritHighLightDarkSwords, Spears, Staves
126Spark CloudSpiritModerateLightningEarth, WoodHorns
127Zap CloudSpiritModerateLightningEarth, WoodHorns
128Thunder CloudSpiritHighLightningEarth, WoodHorns
129FoxkoBeastModerateWoodFireLeaves, Tail
130Red FoxkoBeastModerateWoodFireLeaves, Tail
131Black FoxkoBeastHighWoodFireLeaves, Tail
132Gold FoxkoBeastHighWoodFireLeaves, Tail
133Tin HawkAvianModerateWindLightning, FireTalons, Feathers
134Copper HawkAvianModerateWindLightning, FireTalons, Feathers
135Silver HawkAvianHighWindLightning, FireTalons, Feathers
136Gold HawkAvianVery HighWindLightning, FireTalons, Feathers
137Haunted ArmorSpiritModerateNullNoneSword, Shield
138Mist ArmorSpiritHighNullNoneSword, Shield
139GargathoxDragonHighEarthWindHorns, Tusks, Vertebrae
140BasiliskSpiritHighLightningEarth, WoodHorns, Tusks, Vertebrae
141MimicUndeadHighDarkLightNone
142SaurusReptileHighEarthWindFangs, Claws, Vertebrae
143King SaurusReptileVery HighEarthWindFangs, Claws, Vertebrae
144PhoenixAvianVery HighFireWaterFeathers
145Crawling DragonDragonHighEarthWindFangs, Claws, Tail
146Spear DragonDragonHighWindLightningWings, Tail, Snout
147Sea DragonDragonVery HighWaterLightningFins, Fangs, Tail, Horns
148Lava DragonDragonVery HighFireWaterWings, Fangs, Tail, Horns
149Storm DragonDragonVery HighLightningEarth, WoodWings, Fangs, Tail, Horns
150Doom DragonDragonVery HighDarkLightWings, Fangs, Tail, Horns
151Bright DragonDragonVery HighLightDarkWings, Fangs, Tail, Horns

Familiar List

NameTypeElementLevelStrengthWeaknessSizeNotes
Fiend EyeLesser DevilDark1LowLightSIncreases user’s Dark magic powers, can record and project images, always come in triplets, can act as sentries, originates from Netherworld
Moon BatBeastDark1LowLightSGrants user perfect night vision, increases user’s hearing ability, increases user’s stealth abilities
Skeleton CrowUndeadDark1LowLightSIncreases user’s Dark magic powers, can become invisible, originates from Netherworld
Skitter MouseBeastEarth1LowWindXSCowardly, weakest of all familiars, faints at slightest provocation, natural prey to multiple other familiars
Birch ShroomPlantWood2LowFireSMakes user immune to sleep spells, can use spores to put targets to sleep
Bite PiranhaAquaticWater2LowLightning, WoodSIncreases user’s Water magical powers, increases user’s swimming ability, always comes in fives, aggressive
Devil CatBeastDark2ModerateLightSIncreases user’s Dark magical powers, increases user’s night vision, rather impish, natural rival to Wood Dog, natural predator to Skitter Mouse
Edan GeckoReptileEarth2LowIceSIncreases user’s ability to make potions, increases potency of potions in user’s hands, increases user’s alchemy ability
Gilbert ToadAquaticWater2LowLightningSCan see visions of the past in pools of water, can see shadows of the future in pools of water, increases user’s jumping ability
Gimmer PapillonInsectWood2LowFireSCan blind opponents with flash of light, releases dust from wings that puts targets to sleep, gets stronger when around flowers
Mimic MonkeyBeastWood2ModerateFireMCan copy target’s appearance and abilities, natural rival to Wood Dog
Sniper SpiderInsectDark2LowLightSIncreases user’s eyesight, increases user’s accuracy, makes user immune to poison, can trap targets in spider silk
Soul FlickSpiritLight2ModerateDarkMIncreases user’s Light magical powers, increases potency of healing magic, makes user immune to turning into Undead
Venus FlowerPlantWood2LowFireSIncreases user’s Wood magical powers, can trap targets in thorny vines, gets stronger in forests
Wood DogBeastWood2ModerateFireMIncreases user’s Wood magical powers, increases user’s sense of smell, increases user’s hearing, increases user’s tracking ability, natural rival to Devil Cat, natural rival to Mimic Monkey
Aldwyn SpecterUndeadLight3ModerateDarkMCan use telepathy, grants user telepathy, increases user’s Light magical powers, can become invisible
Frostbite FoxBeastIce3ModerateFireMIncreases user’s Ice magic powers, increases user’s stealth abilities, increases user’s resistance to cold, natural predator to Skitter Mouse
Leaf PixieSpiritWood3ModerateFireSIncreases user’s Wood magical powers, increases user’s natural luck, gets stronger when in forests
Lunar OwlAvianLight3ModerateDarkMIncreases user’s natural Light magical powers, increases user’s night vision ability, increases user’s stealth abilities, natural predator to Skitter Mouse
Pakshara StarfishAquaticLight3ModerateDarkSDrains target(s) of their magical energies, possesses astral projection, can manipulate auras, bit of a prankster, mischievous
Quick CobraReptileEarth3ModerateIceMIncreases user’s natural agility, makes user immune to poisons, fairly aggressive, bite contains poison, natural predator to Skitter Mouse
Shady JackalBeastDark3ModerateLightMCan make user invisible, can become invisible, increases user’s stealth ability
Stealth FalconAvianWind3ModerateLightning, IceMCan become invisible, can become intangible, expert tracker, can fly at 200 MPH, natural predator to Skitter Mouse
Storm HawkAvianLightning3ModerateEarth, WoodMCan summon storm clouds as offensive weapon, gets stronger when struck by Lightning attacks, can fly at 150 MPH, natural predator to Skitter Mouse
Tri-Horned ImpLesser DevilDark3ModerateLightMIncreases user’s Dark magical powers, bit of a hellion
Wise TortoiseReptileEarth3ModerateWindMCan summon barriers to protect self + allies, increases user’s natural magical powers
Blizzard WolfBeastIce4HighFireLIncreases user’s Ice magical powers, increases user’s sense of smell, increases user’s hearing, greatly increases user’s tracking ability, makes user immune to the cold, can summon blizzards
Demi PhoenixAvianFire4HighWaterMIncreases user’s Fire and Wind magical powers, can summon firestorms, can heal user with Magic Fire Feathers, increases user’s vision, increases user’s resistance to heat
Icefloe SealionAquaticIce4HighLightningLIncreases user’s Ice and Water magical powers, greatly increases user’s resistance to cold, increases user’s swimming ability, can summon ice shards for offense
Lava MermaidSpiritFire4HighWaterLIncreases user’s Fire magical energies, can hypnotize enemies with beautiful songs, can summon lava flows, makes user immune to lava, makes user immune to heat
Lothar LeopardBeastWood4HighFireLDrains target(s) of their magical energies, increases user’s Wood magical powers, increases user’s tracking ability, aggressive
Schuyler CondorAvianWind4HighLightningLIncreases user’s natural magical powers, can cast spells, increases user’s mana regeneration, can summon windstorms
Siren HarpyAvianWind4HighLightningLIncreases user’s Wind magical powers, increases user’s eyesight, can use beautiful song to hypnotize enemies, can fly at 75 MPH, can summon small tornados
Feathered SerpentDragonWind5HighLightning, IceLIncreases user’s Wind magical powers, increase user’s natural resistance to illnesses, fairly aggressive, does not like winter
Thunderclap StallionBeastLightning5HighEarth, WoodXLNoble, fierce, listens only to master, can run 100 MPH, can summon thunderstorms
Tsunami SeahorseAquaticWater5HighLightning, WoodLIncreases user’s Water magical powers, can summon tidal waves, can float when out of the water, can snipe target(s) with water shot from 10 miles away
Sandstone GolemSpiritEarth6Very HighWaterXLIncreases user’s Earth magical powers, greatly increases user’s natural durability, can summon slabs of rock for defense, can summon jagged stones for offense
Gorgon ViperDragonFire7Very HighWaterXLDangerous, temperamental, highly aggressive, difficult to tame, increases user’s Dark and Fire magic powers, can petrify enemies, makes user immune to poison, makes user immune to turning into Undead, natural rival/enemy to Zombie Drakes, originates from Netherworld
Zombie DrakeUndeadDark7Very HighLightXLExtremely dangerous, highly temperamental, extremely aggressive, increases user’s Dark and Fire magic powers, can poison all enemies with Miasma Breath attack, can turn enemies into Undead with Rotting Breath, natural rival/enemy to Gorgon Vipers, originates from Netherworld

This is what I've gotten so far. I want to keep the Monster List at the current length so I don't go overboard like I did with Chaos Rising. As for the Familiar List, it's possibly complete but I'm open to suggestions for new additions and whatnot if you feel like it. Let me know what you think and please give me some feedback on this, as it'll help encourage me to do more. That's all for now.
 
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Time for another update.

Okay, as I've said in the "What Did You Write Today" thread a few times, I've finished the Spell, Familiar, and Skill Lists for my prototype idea. They will be posted below. Also I have, at least at the moment, decided on a series name: "Dawn of Courage". Considering that "courage" is one of the major themes with this series (the other being "karma", albeit to a somewhat lesser degree), it felt like a decent fit for the prototype series. I might change it again, depending on how I feel about it later, but, for now, the new name is "Dawn of Courage". And as for the lists, here they are.

Familiar List

NameTypeElementLevelStrengthWeaknessSizeNotes
Fiend EyeLesser DevilDark1LowLightSIncreases user’s Dark magic powers, can record and project images, always come in triplets, can act as sentries, originates from Netherworld
Moon BatBeastDark1LowLightSGrants user perfect night vision, increases user’s hearing ability, increases user’s stealth abilities
Skeleton CrowUndeadDark1LowLightSIncreases user’s Dark magic powers, can become invisible, originates from Netherworld
Skitter MouseBeastEarth1LowWindXSCowardly, weakest of all familiars, faints at slightest provocation, natural prey to multiple other familiars
Honeycomb BeeInsectWood1LowFireXSIncreases user’s sense of taste, increases user’s ability to cook sweets, increases user’s poison resistance, gives user sweet tooth
Birch ShroomPlantWood2LowFireSMakes user immune to sleep spells, can use spores to put targets to sleep
Bite PiranhaAquaticWater2LowLightning, WoodSIncreases user’s Water magical powers, increases user’s swimming ability, always comes in fives, aggressive
Devil CatBeastDark2ModerateLightSIncreases user’s Dark magical powers, increases user’s night vision, rather impish, natural rival to Wood Dog, natural predator to Skitter Mouse
Edan GeckoReptileEarth2LowIceSIncreases user’s ability to make potions, increases potency of potions in user’s hands, increases user’s alchemy ability
Gilbert ToadAquaticWater2LowLightningSCan see visions of the past in pools of water, can see shadows of the future in pools of water, increases user’s jumping ability
Gimmer PapillonInsectWood2LowFireSCan blind opponents with flash of light, releases dust from wings that puts targets to sleep, gets stronger when around flowers
Mimic MonkeyBeastWood2ModerateFireMCan copy target’s appearance and abilities, natural rival to Wood Dog
Sniper SpiderInsectDark2LowLightSIncreases user’s eyesight, increases user’s accuracy, makes user immune to poison, can trap targets in spider silk
Soul FlickSpiritLight2ModerateDarkMIncreases user’s Light magical powers, increases potency of healing magic, makes user immune to turning into Undead
Venus FlowerPlantWood2LowFireSIncreases user’s Wood magical powers, can trap targets in thorny vines, gets stronger in forests
Wood DogBeastWood2ModerateFireMIncreases user’s Wood magical powers, increases user’s sense of smell, increases user’s hearing, increases user’s tracking ability, natural rival to Devil Cat, natural rival to Mimic Monkey
Lightning SpriteSpiritLightning2LowEarthSIncreases user’s Lightning magical powers, increases user’s mana regeneration, a prankster
Aldwyn SpecterUndeadLight3ModerateDarkMCan use telepathy, grants user telepathy, increases user’s Light magical powers, can become invisible
Frostbite FoxBeastIce3ModerateFireMIncreases user’s Ice magic powers, increases user’s stealth abilities, increases user’s resistance to cold, natural predator to Skitter Mouse
Leaf PixieSpiritWood3ModerateFireSIncreases user’s Wood magical powers, increases user’s natural luck, gets stronger when in forests
Lunar OwlAvianLight3ModerateDarkMIncreases user’s natural Light magical powers, increases user’s night vision ability, increases user’s stealth abilities, natural predator to Skitter Mouse
Pakshara StarfishAquaticLight3ModerateDarkSDrains target(s) of their magical energies, possesses astral projection, can manipulate auras, bit of a prankster, mischievous
Quick CobraReptileEarth3ModerateIceMIncreases user’s natural agility, makes user immune to poisons, fairly aggressive, bite contains poison, natural predator to Skitter Mouse
Shady JackalBeastDark3ModerateLightMCan make user invisible, can become invisible, increases user’s stealth ability
Stealth FalconAvianWind3ModerateLightning, IceMCan become invisible, can become intangible, expert tracker, can fly at 200 MPH, natural predator to Skitter Mouse
Storm HawkAvianLightning3ModerateEarth, WoodMCan summon storm clouds as offensive weapon, gets stronger when struck by Lightning attacks, can fly at 150 MPH, natural predator to Skitter Mouse
Tri-Horned ImpLesser DevilDark3ModerateLightMIncreases user’s Dark magical powers, bit of a hellion
Wise TortoiseReptileEarth3ModerateWindMCan summon barriers to protect self + allies, increases user’s natural magical powers
Enigma IguanaReptileWood3ModerateIceMIncreases user’s curiosity, increases user’s problem-solving skills, increases user’s randomness, does not like winter
Melody MacawAvianWind3ModerateLightningMIncreases user’s singing ability, increases user’s vocabulary, increases user’s Wind magical powers
Demon WeaselBeastDark3ModerateLightSIncreases user’s stealth ability, increases user’s night vision ability, increases user’s courage, increases user’s Dark magical powers, natural predator to Skitter Mouse, originates from Netherworld
Befuddle CuttlefishAquaticWater3ModerateLightningSIncreases user’s Water magical powers, can confuse all enemies, increases user’s swimming ability
Blizzard WolfBeastIce4HighFireLIncreases user’s Ice magical powers, increases user’s sense of smell, increases user’s hearing, greatly increases user’s tracking ability, makes user immune to the cold, can summon blizzards
Demi PhoenixAvianFire4HighWaterMIncreases user’s Fire and Wind magical powers, can summon firestorms, can heal user with Magic Fire Feathers, increases user’s vision, increases user’s resistance to heat
Icefloe SealionAquaticIce4HighLightningLIncreases user’s Ice and Water magical powers, greatly increases user’s resistance to cold, increases user’s swimming ability, can summon ice shards for offense
Lava MermaidSpiritFire4HighWaterLIncreases user’s Fire magical energies, can hypnotize enemies with beautiful songs, can summon lava flows, makes user immune to lava, makes user immune to heat
Lothar LeopardBeastWood4HighFireLDrains target(s) of their magical energies, increases user’s Wood magical powers, increases user’s tracking ability, aggressive
Schuyler CondorAvianWind4HighLightningLIncreases user’s natural magical powers, can cast spells, increases user’s mana regeneration, can summon windstorms
Siren HarpyAvianWind4HighLightningLIncreases user’s Wind magical powers, increases user’s eyesight, can use beautiful song to hypnotize enemies, can fly at 75 MPH, can summon small tornados
Crimson PigBeastEarth4ModerateFireLIncreases user’s sense of taste, increases user’s sense of smell, increases user’s appetite, increases user’s hunger for knowledge, increases user’s Earth magical powers
Feathered SerpentDragonWind5HighLightning, IceLIncreases user’s Wind magical powers, increase user’s natural resistance to illnesses, fairly aggressive, does not like winter
Thunderclap StallionBeastLightning5HighEarth, WoodXLNoble, fierce, listens only to master, can run 100 MPH, can summon thunderstorms
Tsunami SeahorseAquaticWater5HighLightning, WoodLIncreases user’s Water magical powers, can summon tidal waves, can float when out of the water, can snipe target(s) with water shot from 10 miles away
Sandstone GolemSpiritEarth6Very HighWaterXLIncreases user’s Earth magical powers, greatly increases user’s natural durability, can summon slabs of rock for defense, can summon jagged stones for offense
Gorgon ViperDragonFire7Very HighWaterXLDangerous, temperamental, highly aggressive, difficult to tame, increases user’s Dark and Fire magic powers, can petrify enemies, makes user immune to poison, makes user immune to turning into Undead, natural rival/enemy to Zombie Drakes, originates from Netherworld
Zombie DrakeUndeadDark7Very HighLightXLExtremely dangerous, highly temperamental, extremely aggressive, increases user’s Dark and Fire magic powers, can poison all enemies with Miasma Breath attack, can turn enemies into Undead with Rotting Breath, natural rival/enemy to Gorgon Vipers, originates from Netherworld

Spell List

NameElementLevelStrengthEffect
Dark StrikeDark1LowStrikes one enemy with dark energy
NightmareDark2ModerateHits all enemies with dark bolts
DarknessDark3ModerateBlasts one enemy with dark energy
Evil GateDark4HighBlasts all enemies with powerful dark explosions
DeathDark4Very HighInstantly kills one enemy depending on natural resistance
Black HoleDark5Very HighTraps all enemies in black hole then explodes with intense dark energies
ReaperDark5Very HighInstantly kills all enemies depending on natural resistance
Rock BlastEarth1LowStrikes all enemies with light earthquake
QuakeEarth2ModerateStrikes all enemies with earthquake
Earth PowerEarth3ModerateStrikes one enemy with vicious earth energy eruption
StalagmiteEarth4HighStrikes one enemy with sharp rocks
EarthquakeEarth5Very HighStrikes all enemies with powerful earthquake
FireballFire1LowThrow fireball at enemy
Flame BurstFire2ModerateSummons pyramid of flames at all enemies
LavaburstFire3ModerateSummons lava eruption at all enemies
InfernoFire4HighSummons sea of fire at all enemies
FirestormFire5Very HighSummons massive flaming tornado at all enemies
HealHealing1LowHeals light damage one ally
RejuvenateHealing2ModerateHeals moderate damage one ally
CureHealing2ModerateHeals all status ailments on one ally
ReviveHealing2ModerateRevives one downed ally
VitalizeHealing3ModerateHeals moderate damage on all allies
RecoverHealing4HighFully heals one ally
VigorHealing5Very HighFully heals all allies
Ice ShardIce1LowBlasts one enemy with chunk of ice
FreezeIce2ModerateBlasts one enemy with ice
IcicleIce3ModerateBlasts all enemies with icicles
HailIce4HighBlasts all enemies with ice storm
BlizzardIce5Very HighBlasts all enemies with vicious blizzard
Holy BoltLight1LowBlasts one enemy with holy energy
Light BurstLight2ModerateBlasts all enemies with flash of holy energy
Holy GrenadeLight3ModerateBlasts one enemy with explosion of holy energy
Divine BoltLight4HighStrikes all enemies with holy thunderbolts
AngelLight4HighDestroys one Undead enemy instantly
JudgmentLight5Very HighBlasts all enemies with powerful storm of holy energy
KyrieLight5Very HighDestroys all Undead instantly
ThunderLightning1LowStrikes all enemies with lightning
ThunderboltLightning2ModerateStrikes one enemy with thunderbolt
Lightning StormLightning3ModerateStrikes all enemies with lightning bolts
Thunder CrashLightning4HighStrikes all enemies with massive thunderbolts
Giga BoltLightning5Very HighStrikes all enemies with multiple giant thunderbolts
Mana BallNeutral2ModerateBlasts one enemy with sphere of magic
Mana DaggersNeutral3ModerateStrikes all enemies with magical daggers
Star ArrowsNeutral4HighStrikes all enemies with celestial arrows
Mind SwordsNeutral5Very HighStrikes all enemies with magical swords, strength determined by user’s intelligence/wisdom levels
WarpQuick Travel1LowTeleports user + allies to previously visited location
EvacuateQuick Travel2ModerateTeleports user + allies out of caves/underground/ruins
TeleportQuick Travel3ModerateTeleports user + allies anywhere
MightStatus1LowIncreases offensive power of one ally for a short time
GuardStatus1LowIncreases defenses of one ally for a short time
AgilityStatus1LowIncreases agility of one ally for a short time
MeditateStatus1LowIncreases natural mana regeneration for a short time
FloatStatus1ModerateGrants one ally levitation for a short time
SmogStatus1LowPoisons one enemy
StunStatus1LowParalyze one enemy
DecomposeStatus1LowSlowly turns one enemy into Undead
DazeStatus1LowConfuse one enemy
FlashStatus1LowBlinds one enemy
BarrierStatus2ModerateSummons a barrier to defend all those inside it, can break if dealt enough damage
ShieldStatus2ModerateIncreases defenses of all allies for a short time
ForceStatus2ModerateIncreases offensive power of all allies for a short time
Wing ShoesStatus2ModerateIncreases agility of all allies for a short time
Float ShoesStatus2ModerateGrants all allies levitation for a short time
SnoozeStatus2ModeratePuts one enemy to sleep
BefuddleStatus2ModerateConfuse all enemies
PetrifyStatus2ModerateTurns one enemy into stone
BanishStatus2ModerateBanishes one enemy to different location, has chance of failing
CommandStatus2ModerateBriefly control any and all monsters within 50 feet of user
CurseStatus2ModerateInflicts a curse on one enemy
GutsStatus2ModerateGrants one ally ability to survive fatal hit and grants rapid healing for short time, has chance of failing
DareStatus2ModerateTaunts enemies into attacking user
CloakStatus2ModerateCamouflages one ally
Magic BarrierStatus3ModerateReduces all incoming spells and effects by 50% on all allies
Stun BurstStatus3ModerateParalyze all enemies
Flash BombStatus3ModerateBlinds all enemies
Curse BreakerStatus3ModerateRemoves curses and/or botched spell effects
TransformStatus3ModerateTransforms one ally/enemy into different form
Miasma BreathStatus4HighPoisons all enemies
Dream ZoneStatus4HighPuts all enemies to sleep
Rotting BreathStatus4HighSlowly turns all enemies into Undead
Stone GlareStatus4HighTurns all enemies into stone
Death WishStatus4HighInflicts curses all enemies
Bubble BurstWater1LowStrikes all enemies with exploding bubbles
Water BombWater2ModerateStrikes one enemy with sphere of water
GeyserWater3ModerateStrikes all enemies with geysers
Tidal WaveWater4HighWashes over all enemies with a large tidal wave
TsunamiWater5Very HighWashes over all enemies with massive tsunami
Razor WindWind1LowSlashes enemy with air
TyphoonWind2ModerateSummons typhoon to slash all enemies
Air SlashWind3ModerateSummons vicious slash of air against enemy
TornadoWind4HighSummons tornado to slash all enemies
HurricaneWind5Very HighSummons hurricane that viciously tears apart all enemies
Seed MachinegunWood1LowStrikes one enemy with multiple seeds fired like bullets
Petal StormWood2ModerateSlashes all enemies with sharp rose petals
Wood SpearsWood3ModerateImpales all enemies with spears of wood
Leaf StormWood4HighSlashes all enemies with giant storm of sharp leaves
Gaia ForceWood5Very HighBlasts all enemies with barrage of giant plant roots

Skill List

NameElementWeaponEffect
Axe ThrowWindAxesHurls several magical axes at all enemies
ExecutionerDarkAxesSlashes with Dark energy that can instantly kill one enemy, deals moderate damage if fails
Helm SplitterDarkAxesSlashes enemy with powerful strike that can tear through armor and shields
Stone CutterEarthAxesCoats axe in stone before striking one enemy with enhanced power
Thunder SlamLightningAxesSlams one enemy with Lightning energy
CrosscutterWindBoomerangsStrikes all enemies multiple times with decreased power
Dual CutterWindBoomerangsStrikes all enemies twice with increased power
Falcon ThrowWindBoomerangsThrows boomerang(s) that strike all enemies multiple times
Flaming ThrowFireBoomerangsThrows boomerang coated in flames
Hunter ThrowWoodBoomerangsThrows boomerangs with Wood energy, extra potent on Beast and Reptile enemies
Power ThrowEarthBoomerangsStrikes all enemies with extreme force
Air Cutter ShotWindBowsFires arrow with Wind energy that can slice through metal
Celestial ShotLightBowsFires arrow with celestial energies at enemy, extra potent on Undead
Decaying ShotDarkBowsShoots cursed arrow at one enemy that slowly turns enemy into Undead
Dragon StrikeLightningBowsSupercharges arrow with Lightning energy before firing
Fire ShotFireBowsShoots arrow coated in flames
Hunter ShotWoodBowsStrikes one enemy with Wood-infused arrow, extra potent on Beast and Reptile enemies
Ice ArrowIceBowsShoots enemy with arrow made of Ice
Miracle ShotLightBowsStrikes one enemy with Light-infused arrow that then heals user
Petrify ShotEarthBowsFires arrow with Earth energy that turns location it hits to stone
Poison ArrowDarkBowsShoots arrow infused with poison to slowly kill one enemy
Sandman ArrowLightBowsShoots one enemy with arrow that has a chance to put them to sleep
Seraph ArrowLightBowsShoots one enemy with holy arrow that then drains mana and restores the user’s mana
SnipeDarkBowsFires arrow that has high chance of instantly killing target, does light damage if fails
Torpedo ShotWaterBowsFires Water-infused arrow at enemy, extra potent on Aquatic enemies
Burning ClawsFireClawsCoats claws in Fire before slashing one enemy
Can OpenerEarthClawsSlashes enemy with claws that can tear armor and shields with ease
Falcon ClawWindClawsRapidly slash one enemy with multiple claw strikes
Leech ClawsDarkClawsStabs one enemy with claws that drains them of their strength
Propeller ClawWindClawsSlashes enemy in spinning motion
Twister ClawWindClawsSlashes claws that create a mini twister to attack all enemies
CutthroatDarkDaggersLaunches sneak attack that can instantly kill enemy, deals moderate damage if fails
Decay CutDarkDaggersSlashes enemy with cursed blade that causes them to turn into Undead
Dream StabLightDaggersStabs an enemy with the chance to put them to sleep
Knife TossWindDaggersThrows several magical daggers at all enemies
Shock StabLightningDaggersStabs one enemy with Lightning-charged dagger that has a chance to paralyze
Sneak AttackWoodDaggersLeaves decoy to take a hit before quickly striking one enemy with barrage of magic daggers
Sonic StabWindDaggersSwiftly strikes enemy with Wind-infused stab, cannot miss
Thorn StabWoodDaggersStabs one enemy, causing thorny vines to emerge from wound and trap enemy
Triple StabWindDaggersStabs one enemy three times with rapid-fire dagger strikes
Venom StabDarkDaggersStabs an enemy with a poisoned blade to slowly kill an enemy
CrusherEarthHammersSlams hammer down on one enemy that can destroy shields easily
Fire HammerFireHammersCoats hammer in Fire before slamming down upon one enemy
Giga SlamEarthHammersSlams one enemy with tremendous force that can break armor and shields with ease
Ice HammerIceHammersCoats hammer in Ice before slamming down upon one enemy
Meteor SmashFireHammersSlams one enemy with the force of a meteor strike
Stun SlamLightningHammersSlam one enemy with Lightning-charged hammer that has a chance to paralyze
Aqua BurstWaterRingsBlasts an enemy with Water burst
Death DrainDarkRingsDrains lifeforce from one enemy, potentially instantly killing enemy, turning it into mana regeneration
Giga BoomFireRingsSummons energy before blasting all enemies with large explosion
Lightning BurstLightningRingsBlasts one enemy with quick burst of Lightning energy
Mana DrainDarkRingsSteals mana energy from enemy
Mini BoomFireRingsSummons energy before blasting one enemy with small explosion
Spell LockDarkRingsPrevents one enemy from using any spells or skills for a short time
Vine SyphonWoodRingsFires energy sphere at ground, summoning thorny vines to ensnare targets and slowly drain them of strength and mana, giving it to user
WillLightRingsAllows user to quickly regenerate chunk of mana energy, the less mana the user has the more energy restored
Bamboo SpearWoodSpearsStabs enemy with Wood-infused spear strike
Cross SlashLightSpearsSlashes enemy in cross-shape with Light-infused spear
Javelin TossWindSpearsHurls spear embedded with Wind energy at enemy that can pierce shields
Meteor ThrowFireSpearsThrows spear with Fire energy at enemy, creating an explosion upon impact
Rapid ThrustWindSpearsStrikes multiple enemies with rapid-fire spear strikes
Stab ThrowWindSpearsStabs one enemy with spear before hurling them into the air
Stone SpearEarthSpearsStabs one enemy with Earth-infused spear strike, has chance to petrify enemy
BangFireStavesSummons energy before blasting everything in front of user with moderate explosion
Big BangFireStavesSummons energy before blasting everything in front of user with large explosion
Magic BurstLightStavesBlasts all enemies with magical eruption
Mana LeechDarkStavesStrikes one enemy with staff before draining their mana and restoring the user’s energy
Mana RechargeLightStavesInstantly regenerate a chunk of mana energy, the less mana the user has the more energy restored
Lightning SlashLightningSwordSupercharges sword with Lightning energy before slashing
Aqua SlashWaterSwordsSlashes one enemy, causing small tidal wave to wash over all enemies
Beast SlashEarthSwordsSlashes one enemy with strong strike, extra potent on Beast enemies
Falcon SlashWindSwordsStrikes one enemy multiple times with Wind-infused slashes
Flame SlashFireSwordsSlashes enemy with Fire-coated blade
Ice SwordIceSwordsSlashes enemy with frigid blade of Ice
Illusion SwordDarkSwordsSlashes an enemy with a blade made from illusions, dealing mental damage and preventing the enemy from using spells or skills for a short time
Leaf CutterWoodSwordsSlashes one enemy with Wood-infused sword followed by sharp leaves inflicting extra damage
Miracle SlashLightSwordsStrikes one enemy with Light energy slash that then heals user
Rapid JabWindSwordsStrike multiple enemies with rapid-fire sword stabs
Reaper SlashDarkSwordsSlashes with Dark energy that can instantly kill one enemy, deals moderate damage if fails

That's the update for now. So far everything is taking shape and all the nitty-gritty stuff has been (mostly) ironed out. I just need to finish Chaos Rising and then I can start "Dawn of Courage". Until next time.
 
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