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Galar's Darkest Hour samples

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Victor vents to Rose who is in a better disguise about Leon's condition.

Many hours passed and the sun soon starts to set. But Victor remained seated in the quiet park. The street was quiet which Victor was pleased with. No one else will come up to him.

“Hey.” A voice whispered, getting Victor’s attention. A hooded figure stood by the fence. His face was well hidden by the coming darkness.

“What is it?” Anger flooded Victor’s voice. What was up with this man and why was he dressed like that?

“You need some help getting back to the hotel?” The man walked up to Victor. His voice was so quiet that Victor had to strain to hear him. “It is getting late. You need plenty of rest for-”

“Leon is fucking injured and is close to death!” Victor snapped, clenching his fists. “Because that bastard was impatient and released that bloody creature!”

The man sighed then composed himself. “That is tragic, but you know Leon can get through this. You have faith in the Champion?”

“Of course.” Victor calmed himself down a bit. “I just want him to recover.”

The man nodded, pulling his hood further over his eyes. “Leon will. He is unbeatable after all.”

“Yes, Leon is.” The man’s words slightly eased Victor. “I do have to go back to the hotel.”

The man walked alongside Victor through Wyndon’s dark streets. Who was he? Victor wondered as he followed. Would he attack Victor and his Pokémon? His fears disappeared when the hotel came into view.

“Thanks, um.” Victor turned to the man. What was his name?

“Do not worry about that.” The man told Victor, waving his hand. His green eyes shined even with the hood obscuring his face. “Just get some rest.” He walked off, leaving Victor standing near the door.
 
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The two wolves, Zacian and Zamazenta arrive.

Eternatus’ giant form loomed over them and roared. Dover’s and Dubwool’s attacks were now unable to faze it. Victor and Hop looked at each other in desperation. “We must call Zacian and Zamazenta.” Victor lifted up the sword. “Galar will suffer destruction, Zacian.”

We are the onies who can aide you.” A faint voice replied in his mind. “Yonge hero who wischen to stoppen the Derk Day.

Howls filled the air causing Eternatus to roar and send out a blast of energy. Two wolf Pokémon shielded the group from the blast. They both looked majestic even with the scars on their bodies.

The blue wolf turned to Victor. “The sweord given min trewe forme.” Victor held up the sword and Zacian was surrounded in bright light. Blue armour covered the Pokémon’s body. She looked so regal, so does Zamazenta in his armour. “We are meant to defenden this contree.” Zacian gazed at Victor with her intense eyes. “For everich humain and enchaunteing creature.

“Eternatus had harmed someone close to us.” Victor found himself telling Zacian. Will Leon ever make it? Victor shoved the thoughts away. Now they needed to fight. “Like you did before all those years ago.”

In response, Zacian raised her sword. “So Eternatus had savaged the humain who you callen Champioun.

Along with Zacian, Zamazenta howled to boost their strength. Zacian moved so fast that Eternatus cannot react. She slashed the beast with such force that could cut it in half. With a blade of psychic energy, she wounded Eternatus even more.

Zacian avoided every attack that Eternatus threw at her. With freezing fangs, she sent the beast reeling. But it prepared for another attack. Eternatus roared and crashed to the floor. Storm had returned. He let out a threatening call at Eternatus.
 
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In this one, how is Victor's anger?

Hop nodded and left him. Feeling bad about pushing him away, Victor cursed. He kicked at the door as he left the power plant. Not caring if it broke, Victor gave it a punch and yelled. “He has been fucking injured, Rose!” As he walked through Hammerlocke Stadium’s entrance, Victor stopped himself. Raihan did not deserve his grief and anger. Had the dragon user heard of the incident yet?

“If I find him.” Victor snarled as he stepped outside. “I will take him out.” He attempted to push the thoughts away. No challenger should do a thing like this. But Leon was now in a critical state. If he and Hop did not come along. Leon would had tried again with the other Ultra Ball. He would had caught Eternatus.

He just wanted Leon to be alright. Victor stood in front of the Pokémon Centre. Dover and the others were healed up. “Let’s get back to Wyndon.” Victor told his team when they stepped outside. He would meet up with Hop at the hotel. Was he alright? Victor wondered.

What is up?” Lightning whined as he looked at Victor. “We have won.

“Rose’s actions caused Leon to get seriously injured.” Victor told the Boltund. “He will not be able to battle for a while.” He walked off, only to be stopped by Charred. “What is it?” Victor nearly snapped at his partner.
 
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