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It is now 16 pages long. I still have to rewrite the fight when Zacian and Zamazenta come in. They speak Middle English, I feel that it would confuse the reader. I do not want to rush the fight scenes. The story gets depressing for a while after this battle.
A major character died and got revived. But the protagonists do not recover from their depression and anger. That would not go away easily.
Many other parts are being worked on. Sometimes I get stuck on what to write next. Some paragraphs are too short and I think. What else should go in there? I try to get rid of redundant words. Making sure the characters are not OOC.
When I have completed Galar's Darkest Hour. It will be posted on here and on Fanfiction.net.
A major character died and got revived. But the protagonists do not recover from their depression and anger. That would not go away easily.
Many other parts are being worked on. Sometimes I get stuck on what to write next. Some paragraphs are too short and I think. What else should go in there? I try to get rid of redundant words. Making sure the characters are not OOC.
When I have completed Galar's Darkest Hour. It will be posted on here and on Fanfiction.net.