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Re: How to Conquer Kanto in Eight Easy Steps - Chapter 70
Thanks for the feedback @Beth Pavell. Let's be honest: you have read this much more recently than I have, and while I can remember the majority, a lot of what you have said is a good reminder for when I go back and do some solid rewriting (though Galactic comes first, as that shit be a nightmare).
I will say that the story it is now is nothing really like how it originally was, as I have clearly improved in writing over the past four years and a lot has moved in in terms of storyline and such. So don't expect 90 chapters of what you have read (though I am sure some would say otherwise). If your expecting Dawn of Darkness level, since you seem to like that, you aren't going to get something like that here, so don't think that is how the story will turn out.
I can't say a lot right now since it is quite early and you do have to really read and explore and find out a lot in this. Your comments are useful for editing though, and I do look forward to fixing some of these old chapters and giving them the significant spruce up they need.
Thanks for the feedback @Beth Pavell. Let's be honest: you have read this much more recently than I have, and while I can remember the majority, a lot of what you have said is a good reminder for when I go back and do some solid rewriting (though Galactic comes first, as that shit be a nightmare).
I will say that the story it is now is nothing really like how it originally was, as I have clearly improved in writing over the past four years and a lot has moved in in terms of storyline and such. So don't expect 90 chapters of what you have read (though I am sure some would say otherwise). If your expecting Dawn of Darkness level, since you seem to like that, you aren't going to get something like that here, so don't think that is how the story will turn out.
I can't say a lot right now since it is quite early and you do have to really read and explore and find out a lot in this. Your comments are useful for editing though, and I do look forward to fixing some of these old chapters and giving them the significant spruce up they need.