Well, I hope I've returned with something passable. Just in case you were wondering, this would be considered a short story, and or one-shot.
Imperfect: A Three Part Mini-Opera
Part One
I kept my hand on top of hers, trying to make sure that it seemed like it was resting and that I wasn’t purposefully making contact with her. But then she smiles, and then somewhere, there’s a sound. And soon the moment has come to life. God she’s beautiful. I look at her and she looks out at the sea, and soon the moment has passed.
I met her at the flower shop. I was just searching for a nice berry for my Whiscash when I noticed this woman across the aisle. I guess you could say it wasn’t the woman herself but it was more of the thing that she was wearing; a scarf. A scarf in Hoenn! That was something I’d never seen before, at least not in this part of the region. You see, down south we usually get nothing but sun until the summer time, which then it’s just usually rain. Barely does a wind wisp to cause for such clothing.
Being the guy I am, I couldn’t help but decide to ask her about it. So I approached her with my shopping basket and she turned, and there was that face. I hadn’t noticed her good looks until then, and I guess you could say I was hypnotized. I guess…
“Excuse me?” she asked me.
Oh god, what was I going to. I mean, I put myself in odd situations very often.
“Um…erm, your…scarf….” I muttered, trying to find the words I’d lost. She stared at me as if I was crazy, and I was, but still.
“Are you…are you hurt? I think I should go get-“
“No! No, I’m fine, really. Your scarf took me by surprise is all.” I finally was able to say something sensible.
“Took you by surprise? The scarf surprised you?” she said confused.
“No, it’s just, I don’t normally see anyone wearing a scarf in Hoenn. It’s pretty hot all the time.” I told her and she just laughed.
“I’m not from here, I’m just here to pick up some pokémon. I guess I just like the way it looks.” She giggled, and I became more surprised.
She was wearing almost foreign attire: a red sweater and sweat pants. I wondered why I didn’t notice the strange clothing before, but I guess the scarf just stood out. Her hair was light brunette, her eyes matching, and her skin very pale. It was obvious that she would never resemble a native. Why didn’t I notice this before? Ugh, stupid! I was so stupid for not realizing. I kept my thoughts to myself as I spoke to her. I introduced myself, and she introduced herself in return.
“Bertha, my name is Bertha.” She extended her hand, and I extended mine.
She was holding it so tenderly I almost fainted. Notice how our eyes discreetly-
“I love you.” I said quickly, and ran away as fast as I could.
Really.
Imperfect: A Three Part Mini-Opera
Part One
I kept my hand on top of hers, trying to make sure that it seemed like it was resting and that I wasn’t purposefully making contact with her. But then she smiles, and then somewhere, there’s a sound. And soon the moment has come to life. God she’s beautiful. I look at her and she looks out at the sea, and soon the moment has passed.
I met her at the flower shop. I was just searching for a nice berry for my Whiscash when I noticed this woman across the aisle. I guess you could say it wasn’t the woman herself but it was more of the thing that she was wearing; a scarf. A scarf in Hoenn! That was something I’d never seen before, at least not in this part of the region. You see, down south we usually get nothing but sun until the summer time, which then it’s just usually rain. Barely does a wind wisp to cause for such clothing.
Being the guy I am, I couldn’t help but decide to ask her about it. So I approached her with my shopping basket and she turned, and there was that face. I hadn’t noticed her good looks until then, and I guess you could say I was hypnotized. I guess…
“Excuse me?” she asked me.
Oh god, what was I going to. I mean, I put myself in odd situations very often.
“Um…erm, your…scarf….” I muttered, trying to find the words I’d lost. She stared at me as if I was crazy, and I was, but still.
“Are you…are you hurt? I think I should go get-“
“No! No, I’m fine, really. Your scarf took me by surprise is all.” I finally was able to say something sensible.
“Took you by surprise? The scarf surprised you?” she said confused.
“No, it’s just, I don’t normally see anyone wearing a scarf in Hoenn. It’s pretty hot all the time.” I told her and she just laughed.
“I’m not from here, I’m just here to pick up some pokémon. I guess I just like the way it looks.” She giggled, and I became more surprised.
She was wearing almost foreign attire: a red sweater and sweat pants. I wondered why I didn’t notice the strange clothing before, but I guess the scarf just stood out. Her hair was light brunette, her eyes matching, and her skin very pale. It was obvious that she would never resemble a native. Why didn’t I notice this before? Ugh, stupid! I was so stupid for not realizing. I kept my thoughts to myself as I spoke to her. I introduced myself, and she introduced herself in return.
“Bertha, my name is Bertha.” She extended her hand, and I extended mine.
She was holding it so tenderly I almost fainted. Notice how our eyes discreetly-
“I love you.” I said quickly, and ran away as fast as I could.
Really.
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